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Another Freestyle fellaz.....
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uhh this ones a lil muddier..is this freestyle?
some of ya backups are off,i think it's cause the flo your
hittin..just a difficult rhythm to nail perfectly..

presence is sik...good multi's hmmm

the more i listen to it the more on it sounds...

aight drop dude...1
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jawns hot delivery and flows all on point, best jawn i heard on here in minute
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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yeah you got hella good presence and flow, too damn short tho.

dope none the less, sounds like a freestyle
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REALLY good flow.. i wanted more tho. and maybe a hook with this song.. that would make me bump it even more. Over all 9/10 Good stuff.
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oh thiz junk iz on point luve the delivery
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Thanks for the feed guys...
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