it was straight, keep it up.

well a freestyle......wow like i could tell when we're in a Wrtten Rhymes forums, which incase shows alot of songs don't get me wrong there are freestyles on here but most people lable the topic "Freestyle"....and i don't care if you call me a noob. or a Pro.....cause this shit is just a website ...

really he didn't woop anyones ass he just sent some "Hate Mail" too some of the best on this website, you can't say he beat them because he wrote a song, now wait for 16 micz, All Killah, Ekmos, and complex write a song back, then you can say he won or lost...in your mind, all i know is that this ...

it was good....(I've seen better from Tom)

I'm tell you don't look into this song for the rhymes and wordplay look into this song as a story cause it's like i think anyone can put out a hot verse but can you make a hot song, that other people can picture and feel the song that was the idea i was going for like how B-Bear said "i sat back ...

yea i made it like that into a rhyme stroy i lost some of the rhymes on bars i know this but i wanna you to feel like you were in the story seeing everything I'm doing.

why did i waste my time reading that?

yo you got me...I'll try my best at this shit.

I'm mama boys yea i said it//
Live off my parents fuck up their Credit//
I have no Money I'm broke as you can get//
I drive a Geo, i use nawspaper to wipe my ass after a shit.

Idk Yet...but we'll get you one..lol

yo man that shit was tight....i liked it alot keep that shit coming.

Thanks man i was just on the ball today.lol

thank you like he said we made it in 30mins. now that I'm looking over it...I see some fuck up i need to fix but it's no biggie..i still like the Idea of the song and everything that went with it.