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Cops & Robbers(3rd Mixtape Track)Ft. Complex As Tom.

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[Micz]
i was equipped with techs and shit, if she slips ill get the bitch
get her with a full clip aim for her breast and ribs

i guess this is it grab the money and get the chick
in her eyes i can tell shes wonderin if this is the last breath she gets

i guess it is im just hoping she has good-lungs
in the future i may regret this shit but i put her in tha-trunk

hearts racing, facing a dangerous situation
start accelerating, making sure the cops are not chasing

the lady keeps screamin im surprised shes breathing
she asks"let me outta here PLEASE!!" keep dreaming

i start feelin adrenaline my heart rates ecstatic
my head begans to spin again, i get over dramatic

comtemplate on choices, i swear i could hear voices
let out a vicious laugh and she says "u cant enjoy this"

chills come from my bone, but im starting to get calm
so i reach for my phone, and call my friend tom

[Tom]
Mother Fucker! its 3 AM, I don't care who this is i'm going to slay-them!
[Micz]
chill,tom i got a chick in the trunk im about to kill
i held her hostage from the store i robbed down by the ville
[Tom]
fo real? how much did you steal? are you concealed?//
u know the deal, meet me at 406 n we'll appeal//
[Micz]
thanks man, i just need to get away from my car, basically
so i tell em later, hang up, but now the cops chasin me

[Cut Scene]
They both hang up as tom prepares to meet micz at the hangout...

[tom]
What the fuck is going on, it all went wrong//
the other day we were looking down thongs//
playing ping pong, now i just hear gongs//
Ill try to be strong, but it wont last for long//
we were going to record, make a cd or some shit//
now this dumb shit, we had tracks up on the board//
ill get right with the lord, before we split//
fuck it or the pit, shit though micz is ignorant//

[micz]
i'll fight til the end tonight,but now i feel contrite
toms a wise friend of mine, before he dies ill rise and give my life

no goodbyes,who gives a fuck about being the good guys
we all die, try seeing through a crooks eyes

police that disguise, but no one ever understood micz
live right i could try, but ive always lived life denied

there is three guys, cops, they're all be-hind
should i resign, if i only could rewind

this robbery went on a decline,a feelings i cant de-fine
i think i see toms car at the spot hoping that he sees mine.


[TOM]
loading the caliber with a clip moving fast//
just need weed already got boos n gatz//
im fucking crazy, I'll baton rouge ur ass//
with bats n bruise you black//
got these guns and a few in back//
im better when it comes to shooting macs//
was looking at micz through the cracks//
of a building that was torn down//
but the wall was still up for now//
so i got real low like a bow//
brushed off my eye brow//
hit at the gat took off the safety//
about to let the damn gage free//
let my rage free, everything was hazee//
i could hear a lady in the dark//
i still shot aiming at his heart//
micz was running, i couldnt let this witness start//
im to smart, took one shot n ripped her apart//
got flesh all over my arm, rubbed it off//
then started to eat the parts that were soft//

[Micz]
the hostage screams for my attention,my minds leavin my comprehension
as i speed to an anscension, the police slip out my dimension

fuck the money, i wish they would stop if i returned it
turn left, whatever happens now i guess ived earned it

cant lose the cops discernment, the money im not concerned with
fuck ill even burn it, many lessons im learn-in

when i was younger never imagined to be doing the bad shit im doing
crime viewing, as i jump out towards a building, i see tom shooting

[Tom]
now we are face to face, with nothing to say//
i put the gat away, without a second of delay//
stepping his way, all i see is a display//
of dismay, like baseball n i missed a play//
twist my wrist, about to filet this bitch//
clench my fist, get a quick twitch//
quench my lips, with my spit, sweating bricks//
drenched with it, looking sensitive//
my face glowing like tents with kids//
this is it...

To Be Continued..
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Post by complexity »

horrible, you did alright though. Lol..

You kept the story going well. And it was
descriptive from one step to the next.
That was the best part.

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Post by Khan-Verse »

it was good....(I've seen better from Tom)
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Post by 16 Micz »

up up up up up up uppin
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Post by Viral »

ive seen better from u..WAY better....like the other verse u dropped...not horrible..but its decent
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Post by drunken jesus »

thats cause that other verse you read was wrote by tom lol

you've improved a good bit 16 but tom still outshined you except for his first verse, overall this was pretty good, pretty creative topic
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Viral »

was it?..lol wtF?
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