if i was fat id do a belly roll, eat jelly whole cuz im already slow
but im not so i guess all thats left is sex wit extraterrestrials
im freakin starvin kids, so i harvest limbs in apartments with
the walls clothed with loose cartalidge, looks so marvolous
in a basement in-cased with two asians ...

Super short my dude, and this style of wrtitting had me confused so i could catch your rythm scheme majority of the time. Cypher more often

3/10 cuz of really short length

u dropped a cool verse, few bars are little stretched ^^^^



its hard to spit, walken with honest drips, my fluid, its....
gone n missed, the swet of an acid trip drips, a feen uses it
my insecurities block thoughts while my music blits
im accusing this envirment, this generations shit
indulging ...

like ur wordplay ^^^

now i dont wanna burn my bridges, cuz i wanna return to this prison
I yern for the women, in these minutes im stricken, sickened of liven
soften my ridges, often like my arm injected off in the kitchen
am i wrong for this privilege, as im calm armed with a witness
if i weld ...

i havent read your last drop but this flow'd well, you could have used more multis , your bars were a tad bit stretched so It fell off at some points but I always find out the gist. Over all this was an above average piece but still lacking general key elements, but elevation will take care of that ...

I ask a chance as I glance, tranced in reverie
they say dance, as they rant to sever me
we're haulted at prospering so obviously
the benefit of the doubt is favored in their policies
a new world order? is a spewed swirl'd boulder
on our shoulders, our names documented in folders
we're drunk off fame ...

u never put in work or smoked a blunt, where u from hater?
your only similarity to weed is that your a "chronic Mastrbater"
Im waitin for saints n got no patients delayin reincarnation
forgotten and forsaken for four days-n fuckin whores-waist-in
blast u wit a kamehameha like saiyans, leave u on ...

thanx for the feed

as my jaw drops I drew a scream, my palms got full of steam
fear fought off da joy music brings, my babys mom now has a eulogy
dis feels like wen applaud stops, I kno da audience is using me
my thoughts brought amusing things, i wanna mute these dreams
never got a marriage, or a carriage, just left ...

Listening to its words I get mixed signals so i check the thesaurus
rythm'd it a chorus, everyone pulled their sticks n mine was da shortest
It was a mistake thinkin it'll relate or replace an empty cemetary
Maybe it'd get me out of this grave, vou'd Id stay but it smiled to say'..
"im goin back ...

well the reck guy basically broke it down so I dont kno wat to tell you mane

elevate, stay active, keep flowin in the cypher

I totaly didnt understand any bars or wordplay in this piece

"Like unicycles wit no balancin."

No dis-respect to you but everything was just so random like

"Girls be like I WONDER if I could be his WOMAN without a LASSO "

I dont know how to got this concept of just scribbling anything down, not ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DfRUQWo1SoA&feature=fvst


I know this is soo old, but its fuckin funny as fuck I just came across this bullshit. After hearing this Im entertained for the week, DAYYUUM!!!

From what i could graspe, this is what it is

Humans, a duplicating mammal enduring great lengths & time
great strength, in-twined with metal and thoughts of false
judgment can be effective, reality isnt always intended
when created, anthropoids and closest to them, mammalian
existed only with ...

good lookin on feed, I;ll hit chu back on ur next drops

uppin