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Subject of fascism (READ)

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every first of the month i slump runnin from my own sentence
as amplified restless seconds turns my world hectic breathless
but once the days switch to the 2nd I accept-it Thanks
keep you peasants guessin if these are reckless-pranks, or
am I an advocate of shitting on you like septic-tanks
either-way its just an easier-day to subtract each message-they
keep trying to keep my lyric content at a minimum velocity
there is no we, my spirits as honest as a promise from odyssey
cuz to get into my mind you'll need more than psychology
To grasp wat I feel and taste wat I swallow, is to endure my poverty

(dedicated to NWO)
as you pulse at veins
scared at the results of this pain
knowing Im off the bolts of this frame
whose fault is to blame (fuck it)
conjured from the gutter I came

so who in the world could have provided this hatred?
maybe its this life that we anguish, its why we're so anxious
as the government re-tracts each individual statement
relapses dis hatred, points a finger at saddam sayin he hate-us
but all along he never was guilty, so why even attack?
Lets look at the facts, as children would we even react?
look where we're at, the media forces us to view us as fat
keep fascism in-tact, as they try to distract whats really at hand
but this mess cannot be swept under our rug
Americas a gift sent from our Mothers Above
but its held hostage, maybe someone will come
but if they dont, then we live in these gutters with drugs
Obama is praise as our savior but what the fuck has he done?
what? is he genuine black African decent cuz where hes from? (No)
Obama gets a standing encore, wat the fuck do they applaud-for?
he didnt remove no troops and we're still fighting the wrong-war
yea we're outta iraq but we just moved lands so they could bomb-more
and of course Im afraid for my life cuz Im still only sophomore
I dont want my body layin in the desserts eattin by condors
these business men dont lose their houses but they pawned-your's
now their building extra Prisons for the mass riots once we've drawn-swords
cuz we'll fight hard and we wont be the usual blond-horde

(I'll hit you back with feed)

-- Fri May 29, 2009 8:10 am --

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Post by K KiLLaH »

lmao tough shit ur kickin sum real political views with an almost flawless flow n smooth multi work

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cuz to get into my mind you'll need more than psychology
To grasp wat I feel and taste wat I swallow, is to endure my poverty
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i was gonna highlight some shit from this but the whole thing was fire man, mos def felt was u were puttin down here man... prolly one of the illest drops bout politics ive seen in a minute homie... 9/10 only cuz theres no such thing as perfection
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: Subject of fascism (READ)

Post by eMCee Havic »

this was more my style of piece here, i dig that political tip, there was a lot of sick messages and wordplay, multis were fire


i give it a 8,5/10


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Obama gets a standing encore, wat the fuck do they applaud-for?
he didnt remove no troops and we're still fighting the wrong-war
yea we're outta iraq but we just moved lands so they could bomb-more

keep the flows droppin man
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good lookin on feed, I;ll hit chu back on ur next drops

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