damn..yall need to relax..i said i was messin around with somethin..the only post here that was needed was hazards...he actually gave me feedback and TIPS

hike, bike trips

just messin around on this one...


If I'm givin a chance I'll jump with it
I aint chicken tell these chicken bitches listen they could get it
Cuz I'm vivid how I live it close to the edge I spit it
Not carin who I'm pissen off or pissen on now listen dawg
I get it right I get it wrong, I'm on a ...

word..i agree with everyone else that posted in here..its all played out..this is a writtens area, theres room for creativity...throw some new punchlines here and there, wordplay, dope rhyme schemes and add some complexity..but not too much is case theres some dumb people here (no offense to anyone ...

nice drop dude

flow was on point, rhyme scheme was nasty...but lyrically it wasn't too exciting

good read tho homie

haha...that was pretty good

personally...i hate writing hooks..well not that i hate it, but its hard for me

i prefer to just sit and write pages and pages upon random bars and piece them together..lol

last night

when was the last time you thought about George W. Bush?..lol idk

thanks man...no doubt...ive been lookin around the site..i like the way its layed out

wat up ppls...i havent really been online that much in a few months...jus tryin to get back into the swing of things and also tryin to step my game up at the same time...


I'm Really A Sick Dude, The Flow Is Straight Vomit/
They Callin The Kid A Prophet As If My Name Was Muhammad/
Comets And ...