sry for takin so long ta drop, ill should hav mine up ina bit

oh yeah heres my check in

4 bars

due 48 hours afta both check ins


peacee

n oh yeah im checkin in

4 bars, due 48 hours afta both check ins

peace

when i spit, i leave yall subliminal-messages
bout wat'll happen like noncriminal-presages//

call me crazy if you must, but in my vision you should trust
cuz they one i just had was bout how yo rap career is a bust//


next word: euphoric

* adjective: exaggerated feeling of well-being or elation

damn, i thought dat ish was hot

tucked up unda my shirt, you can find this shiny new thing
it'll turn jeans to a skirt, n itll rattle ya bling//

they call me mr. toastman not a postman like juelz
cuz i keep dat toast-man, n i put to shame many fools//

"If my 'lips' never stop...Would you consider 'Def' a Prostitute? "

i really liked dat line for some reson haha but anyway nice drop dude, props

thnx for tha feed dudes

ill go set both of em up then

feedback link


heres a quick 4 bars for my first drop here, please crit


i stay ill on tha scence, like a pair of classics wit hot-strings
i stay chill wit a beam, cuz like middle easterns i dot-things//

i murk so many dudes, they should call me "lil-phlat-line"
everyone says im spineless, but ...

decent, i think tha ryhmin fell off ina couple spots like MajicMark said, but overall pretty good

anybody wanna do a 4 bar battle?

i stay quick on tha draw, while you stay lethargic
i leave ya girl in awe, while you try to in-large-it//

im hated by many, but confronted by tha brave
yuo steady pinchin pennys, while stacks i wave//



new word: phantom

* noun: something existing in perception only
* noun: a ghostly appearing ...