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My cerebral vein is pumping. With thoughts considered 'inhumane'
While I am forced to watch Mr. McCain's ad Campaign
My spit reign's ill. Like a disease from a transmute
If my 'lips' never stop...Would you consider 'Def' a Prostitute?
Like Marley and his Marijuana, my metaphors are 'dope'.
Consider me the Pope! Cause I spit flows in "The Scriptures"!
If you were the boss of this shit. Would you have infinate missiles?
Would your potential be endless? Would your giftness be serial?
If you were Columbine minded would your lyrics get rewinded?
With spirits at its highness, the miracle of text is like water to wine
When a shrine fills with flows...leaked from spines!
A spine gripped in a talon is what sits on my crown.
I don't hold records but I can scratch with the vinyl down
I frown and bust shots that hit with the first shell
Than grab a pen and write a verse next to the dirt where it fell
In my death-blow stance, watching the ghetto's expanse, I can see shadows dance
Consider it Castro the way I advance with a sword, a horse and a lance!
This grammatical arrangement of words is my relevance
Since adolescence, the brilliance of my rhymes left me in amazement
Weather demonic or celestial, they dexterously enforce their disposition
Like gestures generating kinetics, ultimately inducin' literacy
Technically, my vocabulary has its own soul that has yall feelin' it deeply
A lyrical labyrinth of invective poetry locked in an analytical review
Is the review given by all of you. Did these lines give yall an evil grin?
Did I kill it like Liddel when he took that shot to the chin?
When I click 'submit' will the outcome be passive?
Will yall be supportive? Will yeah go on to the next drop lickety split?
Or will yeah digest these words and get an impressive vocab in your shit?


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Post by Lil Phlat »

"If my 'lips' never stop...Would you consider 'Def' a Prostitute? "

i really liked dat line for some reson haha but anyway nice drop dude, props
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Post by precise »

i love readin your posts man

im gonna call u the "grammatical cannibal" haha, u eat vocab for breakfast lunch and dinner motherfucker, good job dude keep droppin
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeah this was vocab steamin i loved it dude keep bringing it dude
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Prit-E »

VOCAB WAS ON POINT..FLOW STILL AWKWARD..BUT I SEE NOW THAT YOUR MORE OF A POET THAN A SPITTER....ADD SOME MULTIES AND SHIT WILL FLAME
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Post by Mass Effex »

In my death-blow stance, watching the ghetto's expanse, I can see shadows dance
Consider it Castro the way I advance with a sword, a horse and a lance!

^^I liked that one. You always write political stuff with messages which is always good to read. Keep Droppin that hot shit
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Post by Haz »

Haha

Good Vocab Some Straight Metaphors
Witty Plays..
Bit Of Humor..
Lot's Of Meanin...
Aight Flow...

U Deffo Are Gettin Better
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