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When Im textin/i catch 187's/N Less than a Millasecond/Im the sickest Killen Legends/Enhaling Blunts/I Leave a Bleek Trail of Dust/impalen Gut's/when i'm
Nailen Slut's/These Frail Fuck's/Spit Stale Stuff/Tryen to Bale n Jump/
Getting Winded With There Sail's Cut/now Watch There Tales Tuck/
When it's Noyble that Raises Hell Up/Derailen Shmuck's/when i Saw Fuckers/
With Box cutters/Looken For a random Mall Dumpster/For there Corpse to be
Tossed Under/as i Plot n Wonder How long it'll take'em to Rot n Suffer/
I strait Slaughter Lames/So before Your Whore's Water breaks/i'll kill
her before You can think of your Daughter's Name/


I'm Jus another Cocky Kid/With'haters that love to Watch Me Min/when i spit
my Disses are Phatter than Donkeylips/Becuz im Rappen High/so i hope to your
Satisfied to Meet the Steemroller/your Nose Was Flattend By/So i dont a
357 magnum/to Outrap these Wackbums/After i use n Axe n Smash'em until
they have Slashed Lungs/layen with Back up In a Bathtub/so talk shit n end
up the next Victim/who wont Outlive His Next Thread Victim/becuz im Death Spitten/Deliverin Possessed Exrocism's/Mixed in With torment/to your strip/
Along With War ship's/that Worship/My Pour Sportsmenship/


I'll Leave feed Back.... On all the other Drop's Jus been Busy out

hahaha sorry About the typo's i was in a hurry

that one line Was Dont end up the Next Victim/that wont outlive/his next
thread Visit/

this was alright...flowed pretty well...i like your style but i dont like how you type it...i mean i understand it and can get it but u seem like u put the dash after a multie which is straight cuz it does help when u read it to get the flow but idk it gets confusin sometimes...but other than that this shit was pretty good

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yeah this was pretty good piece
flowed well
i liked the multies
it was sometimes confusing but it came out pretty good
keep'em comin