When Im textin/i catch 187's/N Less than a Millasecond/Im the sickest Killen Legends/Enhaling Blunts/I Leave a Bleek Trail of Dust/impalen Gut's/when i'm
Nailen Slut's/These Frail Fuck's/Spit Stale Stuff/Tryen to Bale n Jump/
Getting Winded With There Sail's Cut/now Watch There Tales Tuck/
When it's Noyble that Raises Hell Up/Derailen Shmuck's/when i Saw Fuckers/
With Box cutters/Looken For a random Mall Dumpster/For there Corpse to be
Tossed Under/as i Plot n Wonder How long it'll take'em to Rot n Suffer/
I strait Slaughter Lames/So before Your Whore's Water breaks/i'll kill
her before You can think of your Daughter's Name/
I'm Jus another Cocky Kid/With'haters that love to Watch Me Min/when i spit
my Disses are Phatter than Donkeylips/Becuz im Rappen High/so i hope to your
Satisfied to Meet the Steemroller/your Nose Was Flattend By/So i dont a
357 magnum/to Outrap these Wackbums/After i use n Axe n Smash'em until
they have Slashed Lungs/layen with Back up In a Bathtub/so talk shit n end
up the next Victim/who wont Outlive His Next Thread Victim/becuz im Death Spitten/Deliverin Possessed Exrocism's/Mixed in With torment/to your strip/
Along With War ship's/that Worship/My Pour Sportsmenship/
I'll Leave feed Back.... On all the other Drop's Jus been Busy out
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this was alright...flowed pretty well...i like your style but i dont like how you type it...i mean i understand it and can get it but u seem like u put the dash after a multie which is straight cuz it does help when u read it to get the flow but idk it gets confusin sometimes...but other than that this shit was pretty good
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yeah this was pretty good piece
flowed well
i liked the multies
it was sometimes confusing but it came out pretty good
keep'em comin
flowed well
i liked the multies
it was sometimes confusing but it came out pretty good
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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