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Mind Of A Fucccin Lunatic

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I breathe evil and eat people that speak feeble
diseased needles stuck in my head leavin a mean leakthrough//
enjoy these couple bars because these is a sneak preview
put tha d-eagle to ya head and make mind see-thru//
i catch a urge of rush when i bust wit my murderas
the pastor locked us in tha churchh and tried to murder us(ahhhh)//
and when i got to hell they asked what my murder was
i said a derranged priest who enjoys murdering murderas//
suspended me for indecent exposer along wit a bunch of broken rules
came back the next day...shot up the whole school//
they say people like me dont deserve to breathe
and i agree so i strap C3 to both of my knees//
walk in the police station and take my last pee
detonate the bomb and take all them bitches wiiit mee//(booooom)

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Post by - Mutual - »

well i like ya flow
nice concepts
good shit on both ya scripts
it was overall 8.5/10
for me anyway
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by MadKNiFe »

The flows was cool. . Stayed on thru out. . And i loved the multis in the first two bars more. . I could say a 8/10
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Post by Tragedy »

appreciated yall
uppin
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