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DIS TRACK RIGHT HERE AS GIVEN ME A LOT OF RECOGNITION, IT''S ONE OF DA BEST TRACKS I HAVE DONE, IT'S AN OLD TRACK I RECORDED BACK IN 07, IT WAS FEATURED ON A MIXTAPE DAT SUPPOSEDLY GOT NOMINATED 4 BEST MIXTAPE IN CHICAGO, IL IN 07; DUNNO IF IT WON OR NOT BUT 4RM WAT I WAS TOLD MY TRACK MURDERED DA WHOLE MIXTAPE. I DUNNO WHO WOULDN'T BE ABLE 2 RELATE 2 DIS TRACK PLZ LEAVE A NIGGA SUM FEED AND I'LL DO DA SAME 4 WHO EVER LEAVES ME FEED.


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Post by - Mutual - »

well nice flow i liked it
nice beat and it was good shit
i agree fuck bush tho and keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da feed nigga best thing bush has done was sign dat shit so we could get them checks i jus got 6 bills yesterday oh yea nigga lol uppin 4 feed
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Post by Viral »

dis song is dat shit right dere...lol..used to be my ringtone till my phone fucked up!..haha..shits crack!
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good lookin out viral yea i remember u had da whole track on there i think dats da 1st time i met u 2 yea it was cuz i asked u wat type of celly u had than we bluetooth dat shit lol
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Hot track...ya lyrics are basic no lie...but ya Scheme And Concept Isn't...Ya Maybe Need To Up Ya Vocab But Otha Then That..You Got Everything On Lock...Quality Was Good.....so thats good....rhymes are on point... beat was nice...ya delivery is popping...and ya Mic Presence i'm definitely feeling....big ups...

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you kinda sound like Chino XL to me...
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Post by complexity »

I'm feeling this man.

I think, it's my favorite track from you.

It comes off very fitting for you and your personality as I know it.

I didn't notice to many retarded rhymes either.
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Post by HKX »

lol good lookin' on da feedback Duc3 and Plex shit is appreciated glad ya'll feelin dis track, me sound like Chino Xl wtf I dunno dat but Chino is da shit tho... I got sum other shit jus waitin' 2 be recorded; I'm jus tryin' 2 be me and I got more shit comin soon, dis track is jus a pinch of wat I could do so is da other shit I got on here
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good lookin on da feed toyh i'm glad u feelin dis track beat is sick i kno dat 4 a fact good lookin on da feed
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Dope track son..you got a ill swagger
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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da feed nigga shit is really appreciated thanks 2 everyone else as well
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Post by Dead Silence »

good ass track
i love Latino rappers because they can switch up the languages even tho i cant understand them it sounds nice
so this was a good listen

much props
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good lookin on da feed dawg i wanted dis track 2 stand out and at da time i wrote dis it was da time all dat immigrant shit was goin on i was like aww hell naw these niggaz aint gettin away wit dat lol
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Post by 16 Micz »

shit is hot fam, i like the lyrics, and the flow to tha beat is perfect..
i like the hook, not as much as the rest of the song tho, good shit fam.
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Post by Glamtrash »

Good shit guy, suits your personality.
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