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Yeah...just a lil keystyle

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trynna figure out the style on the site. It seems to favor medium-ish length bars over short or long bars. It's a trial and error thing, feed is appreciated

Composing perfection when my verse-drops-intact..releasing letter by letter each word-blocks-ur-path,
Who burnt-all-ur-plans?..there is no doubtin me cuz I 'RISE TO THE OKAY SHIN' like 'CONCERNED-SOCCER-FANS'//

Y'all ain't enduring this..my attacks-lasts-months..kickin so many flavors I even leave a fat-man-stunned,
Ur net career? face the fact-that's-done after I leave y'all 'FLYING OFF THIS BOARD' like 'JACKASS-STUNTS'//

Constantly teaching lessons-to-youth..it's well known my techniques worry you and pose a threat-to-ur-crew,
Claimin illness and thats the best-u-can-do?..like 'PAUL PIERCES TRAINER' these cats stay 'STRETCHIN-THE-TRUTH'//

Release raw techniques y'all too scared-to-try-to-witness..y'all want war? I stay prepared-with-fine-precision,
Can't bare-to-rhyme-up-with-this..I stomp cats out and leave 'FOOTPRINTS ON THEIR HEADS' like 'CAROLINA-FITTEDS'//

Can't deny-my-ruthless-feats..fuck biters..I've mastered this game and never had to rely-on-using-cheats,
Supply-these-dudes-defeats and if they deny my skill..like 'AFRICAN FEASTS' they're 'LION-THRU-THEIR-TEETH'//

So I stay shinin my style glows-sun-lit-rays..crabs think they can contend with this?..there's no-fuckin-way,
Don't know-wut-it-takes..newbs need to realize that 'PROPS DON'T COME EASY' like startin 'LOW-BUDGET-PLAYS'//

Y'all can't relate-to-me..I'm on another plateau..facin-me? now that's a position that I would hate-to-be,
Never feelin complacency..cats really think they're sick..I'll take care of that and make y'all 'TAKE-A-LEAVE'//(Aleve)

Rhymes I've dealt-steadily..capable to melt-vets-u-see and damage their brains so they need help-mentally,
Top of all time?..u best-mention-me cuz when I attack y'all better 'BRACE URSELVES' like 'SELF-DENTISTRY'//
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Left feed on that future piece and the grass stains joint
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Y'all can't relate-to-me..I'm on another plateau..facin-me? now that's a position that I would hate-to-be,
Never feelin complacency..cats really think they're sick..I'll take care of that and make y'all 'TAKE-A-LEAVE'//(Aleve)

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man this piece was some tight shit
i liked the flow layout done nicely
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Who burnt-all-ur-plans?..there is no doubtin me cuz I 'RISE TO THE OKAY SHIN' like 'CONCERNED-SOCCER-FANS'//

whoa


Top of all time?..u best-mention-me cuz when I attack y'all better 'BRACE URSELVES' like 'SELF-DENTISTRY'//


that shits hot, I like your old style more though
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