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Free'd punches collection......

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A few of my opens from a previous sight, a littleold, but should show you waht im about, my style etc.. also known for my topicals...

dawg if we battle… you better believe ill bet it all
cause imma take you out in one swipe, like dates on credit cards
you better… nahhhh… im a beast and all ya plays are meek and forced
look im so far above you, If I wanna shit on you, I gotta push a week before
you a geek n' more, shit you'll get hurled n' embaressed
see you just a “weaken'd fuck!â€
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aight nice stuff but i mean to get feed since ya give feed to others and read the rules so that next time you post ya post wont be deleted but ya might have to step ya rhymes up to compete with some of the people on this site but ya rhymes are good
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

I Liked it.....Flowed Smoothly..And Multis Was On Point....And I Appreciate Ya For Leavin Me Feed...So I' Just Wanted Ta Return Tha Favor..Plus I Was Eager To See What U Was Capable Of..And Im Impressed...Keep It Up...
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Post by ..DaGreatest.. »

sum punches were ill some were wack/played..
"you a geek n' more, shit you'll get hurled n' embaressed
see you just a “weaken'd fuck!â€
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