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Real Shit Vol. Two Presents "Life As A Condom"

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..DaGreatest.. "Ever wonder what a condom would say if it could talk.. Lettmee break it down"

Stayin stretched, strapped and protected ready to enter a bitch's vagina
Hit em from tha back or various positon's or could center a inch behind ya
Fuckin global women leavin celebs pleasured leavin marks on majesties
No time limit in my vocab, cuz either I'm causin some sparks or tradegies
Got women moanin breathless so now she can favor the many sighs
I'm so 'versatile' nigga I fuck em in different flavors and plenty sizes
I go for 'one nighters' or 'all timers' makin many wanna get with us
I'm overseas too cuz I might have legs open on a French rendezvous !!
Then I'm off to 'Mexican border' where 'pouncin em in cities
Mamis is sayin "jódame" cuz these babes bouncin in they tities
I feel somebody comin but first I gotta finish my race to that ass
The nigga usin me takes me off and puts me in a place in tha trash
That chica got me a workout 2day.. she better or I'll tank you
I'm done but I just wonder why tha fuck I never get a THANK YOU !!

Just some entertainin shit nigga...

*jódame means fuck me in spanish just incase ya ain't know..
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

LOL..Very Creative Bro..

Then I'm off to 'Mexican border' where 'pouncin em in cities
Mamis is sayin "jódame" cuz these babes bouncin in they tities


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Multis was on point..as i said above creative..I Liked it bro.. nice drop..
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well all the shit i've read of yours is highly creative and this was just another one of them nice pieces
8.5/10

Fuckin global women leavin celebs pleasured leavin marks on majesties
No time limit in my vocab, cuz either I'm causin some sparks or tradegies
Got women moanin breathless so now she can favor the many sighs
I'm so 'versatile' nigga I fuck em in different flavors and plenty sizes

My fave Bit ^
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..This Shit Coulda Been Hella Creative if U Tied Tha Verse into Tha Title Of Tha Scrip ..
Ya Know? ..
It Was a Koo Read ..
It Mos Deffo Coulda Been Better ..
But U Did a Decent Job On it ..
So Props ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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