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..Ruthless Retaliation ..

Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Hi Haters!

...This Ugly Prick Stay Dump`d Kids ..Use to Be an Emo Fag Wit a Make Up Kit ..
I`ll Have "Spits in ya Face" Since You Wanna Be New York ..i`ll Play Pumpkin ..
That Flow He Dropped Was Way Lumpin,
and Was Like "Fight Night 2007" A Bunch of Played Punches ..
I Move away Unhit, Dom a Emo Bitch,Only Way We See Holmes Sick, and Usually Stayin Dark ..
He Say He Don't Give a Fuck about Bitches and Breaks They Hearts ..
But He Tries Kill Himself When They Break apart ..Now He's Tha Target Takin Darts ..
Blow Him Outta His Mind Only Time He insanely Smart, But He's Style? He Used "Rell`s Layouts" Like "Mappin a Skatin Park" ..
You`s a Punk So Know ya Roll and Play ya Part and Watch How Tha Wordplay Pick ya Brain aPart ..
Niggas Like You, I Left em in Caddies, Leave Bigger Shits On em Than When Law is Stretchin in Panties ..
Ain't Gotta Be Freakin, He Not Heat Speakin, Lame Stays On Eminem`s Dick Like Sexual Candy ..
I Remember Goin Thru Tha Textin You Hand Me ..Think That You Flow Godly But Rell? Jesus Had To Bless Him Wit Dams, See ..
I`m Makin Faggots Mad Got em Leavin Wit Tha Tools, Keep Fuckin Wit Me You`ll Be another Story ya Fam Readin in Tha News ..
Me and ya Dame Had Meets in tha Nude, I Put Her To Bed, Dom Sound Like Kurse Tellin Her To Wake Up But She Reachin For Tha Snooze ..
Dom Tha Type To Be Friends Wit a Chick and End Up Leavin Wit Her Dude ..Remember When it Was against all odds For Me Now You Wanna Even Up Tha Rules ..
You Don't Like How Tha Tables Bein Turned Lik Lawgix Reachin For Some Food ..
I`ll Leave You Leakin From Tha Ooz ..Niggas Hate Me But This Juss Rhymes ..
Dom Scared To Spit cus Mine, Killed em Messed Wit His Head Like a Sick Fucks Mind ..
Say I Recycle Then List Up Lines, That Reply You Did Was about as Gay as Rh1no Sendin Me Dildos For Christmas Time ..
I Remember When He Saved Mah Pics ..Copy N Pasted Mah Shit ..
While I Was in Tha Lac Wit ya Dame Tryna Taste Mah Dick ..
Cole Says : Damn He Makin it Look Worse Everytime He Erase That Pic ..
He Say Nobody Has Actual Facts On Him But When He Saw That Pic He Got in His Home alone Pose ..( Wha`s Good Sam Lol)
And He Got Beat Up Why Take a Pic? Since We ain't Got No Facts On Him I Guess No One Knows ... Lol
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Viral »

rells baaaack..haha...i figured id give it a read since ur ass has been MIA for who knos how long....i liked it tho...u had some pretty good punches man...

Say I Recycle Then List Up Lines, That Reply You Did Was about as Gay as Rh1no Sendin Me Dildos For Christmas Time ..

Dom Tha Type To Be Friends Wit a Chick and End Up Leavin Wit Her Dude

those were my two favorite lines....maybe this back n forth dissin'll get the site active..lol...keep doin u
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Post by Kurse »

Always on the dick one way or another. haha U make me laugh.

I swear Rell. You can't keep my name outta ur writtens if your life depended on the shit. You must dream of me at night or sumthin. Be easy son.

Gay-ass nigga. hahaha
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Bitch You act Like I Dissed You?..
Tha Whole Time I Was Gone mah Name Was in ya Bummy ass Lips ..
So Fuck You ..
Oh GoodLookin Out Viral
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Kurse »

You wish I'd conversate about a lame like urself...
...don't get me twisted mistakin ur habits for mine hoe.
hahaha
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Post by Omega Bill »

Solid flow throughout.

Had some heavy hittin punches here.

Favorite:
Me and ya Dame Had Meets in tha Nude, I Put Her To Bed, Dom Sound Like Kurse Tellin Her To Wake Up But She Reachin For Tha Snooze ..
Dom Tha Type To Be Friends Wit a Chick and End Up Leavin Wit Her Dude ..Remember When it Was against all odds For Me Now You Wanna Even Up Tha Rules ..


Heavy stuff right there. Good shit man.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

...Riight Kurse ..
Lmfao ..
I Seen it ..Quit Lyin

GoodLookin Out Wild Bill ..
Appreciate it ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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MiiLZ

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-MiiLz.

Post by -MiiLz. »

Blow Him Outta His Mind Only Time He insanely Smart, But He's Style? He Used "Rell`s Layouts" Like "Mappin a Skatin Park" ..

Me and ya Dame Had Meets in tha Nude, I Put Her To Bed, Dom Sound Like Kurse Tellin Her To Wake Up But She Reachin For Tha Snooze ..

Dom Tha Type To Be Friends Wit a Chick and End Up Leavin Wit Her Dude ..Remember When it Was against all odds For Me Now You Wanna Even Up Tha Rules ..


^^^ Lol Son U Came Nice in Dis One ..Welcome Back To Tha Site.
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Post by JayGunna »

nice as usuall...good shit homie killin it with the personals and punches...S.oldiers A.t W.ar...No One fuckin with us...
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...GoodLookin Out Milz ..
Appreciate Tha Feed Fam ..

Good Looks J.Gunnz ..
S.a.W Up Famo ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by complexity »

A lot of good punches, but this is what stood out flow wise.

"I Remember Goin Thru Tha Textin You Hand Me ..Think That You Flow Godly But Rell? Jesus Had To Bless Him Wit Dams, See ..
I`m Makin Faggots Mad Got em Leavin Wit Tha Tools, Keep Fuckin Wit Me You`ll Be another Story ya Fam Readin in Tha News ..
Me and ya Dame Had Meets in tha Nude, I Put Her To Bed, Dom Sound Like Kurse Tellin Her To Wake Up But She Reachin For Tha Snooze ..
Dom Tha Type To Be Friends Wit a Chick and End Up Leavin Wit Her Dude ..Remember When it Was against all odds For Me Now You Wanna Even Up Tha Rules .. "

I definitely like the every 3 bars a hard punch.

You had some filler but kept it mostly on target.

Keep it up.
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Good Lookin Out Plex ..
Appreciate it ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
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Post by complexity »

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Post by Cee4 »

this was nice. u had a lotta punches here.
most of them were good but couple didnt really hit
i didnt like the structure but its all good
anyway welcome back to the site


You Don't Like How Tha Tables Bein Turned Lik Lawgix Reachin For Some Food ..
I`ll Leave You Leakin From Tha Ooz ..Niggas Hate Me But This Juss Rhymes ..
Dom Scared To Spit cus Mine, Killed em Messed Wit His Head Like a Sick Fucks Mind ..
Say I Recycle Then List Up Lines, That Reply You Did Was about as Gay as Rh1no Sendin Me Dildos For Christmas Time ..
I Remember When He Saved Mah Pics ..Copy N Pasted Mah Shit ..
While I Was in Tha Lac Wit ya Dame Tryna Taste Mah Dick ..
Cole Says : Damn He Makin it Look Worse Everytime He Erase That Pic ..
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ripped it
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

long time no see rell,soon as i read this i thought of budden cuz of the hi haterz thing..what i wuz gonna quote wuz already mentioned but the flow wuz sick,multis were there too..only thing id say u cudda done more of,iz usin more vocab but other then that i dont got ne complaints,keep it up
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