R.I.P Jim Boy

[Cee4]

this was a verse i wrote about a week or so ago for a friend of mine that died
i didnt feel like posting it then but i changed my mind and finished it off
http://www.eveningtimes.co.uk/news/disp ... _death.php


How many that I know gotta go, The reapers readied like a vulture
Booze and blades in Glasgow, for years its embedded in our culture
U were always a hard head, always the first to clash for ya respect
They sayin that's what u get, they sayin you slashed her in the neck
Fuck the press, sweept it under the carpet, it barely made the news
We rolled with some assholes, but u treated everyone fairly in the crew
Their sayin u were quiet, but you were always the life and the soul
But what I really wanna know, when u die is it eternal life or a hole
You should see the outside of your flat, its like a guard of flowers
So many sent their condolences, you could read the cards for hours
Police say their close to being caught, but so far no ones been hit
Lol the same old script, a pub full of witnesses but no one seen shit
I remember when I moved out mums, the first night u came round yo
Said u`d calmed down yo, oh well I guess that pride was ur downfall
My mum cried for hours, im still in a state of sadness and shock
You were no angel, but you didn't deserve all the bad shit you got
Hopefully your at peace, at least them bastards wont stress you
My thoughts are with your fam, they gotta live with the stress too
Im just pleased to have met you, R.I.P Jamie I`ll never forget you

[MesaR]

dude there is no way i can criticise what you just wrote

lyrically it was good, not as your best, but this must of been hard.
i'm sure he would be proud of it man, sorry about your loss