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Post by Cee4 »

bill man slow the fuck doen im trippin man. dont go chris benoit on us. nah seriously you already you were rappin far too fast for me man. props tho for being brave enough to attempt it but man you need some ketamine to slow your ass down. lol tho i hope this is the start of the audio shit for you. ill be honest im fucked but for the first time ive got that itch to attempt some audio myself. props my dude
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Post by Omega Bill »

You'll see who I'm baggin with my track Im posting tomorrow, and its a lot better.

Thanks for the feed.
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Post by Arvincible »

Nigga Bill is the next generation of the Twista/ Bone Thugs line.

This sounds tight, and its gonna be on MTV for the fastest rhymes.
I forgot the name of the show but its with busta rhymez and twista and shit
I thought i was a decent entrance into the audio world of ILLEST.

Imma give it a 7/10 for a start and that it needs more clarity,
but all in all, this shit sounded tight even though i couldnt understand it.

Imma go to audio soon, and cee seems to be comin along with me, so heres a new wave of audio hittin illest soon!!
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Holy damn.
Sounds Like u accelerated the speed ..
Dont think thats natural .
Ya voice is REAL deep too .
this was okay for a first audio.
Ride the beat next track,
Beat was dope btw.
Nice work billy can
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thanks for the feed.

Raiza, nah it's not accelerated bro, haha. You can ask Arv I was spittin it to Arv before I recored it with a mic over AIM, lol. Shits natural.

Told you I had a deep voice, lmao.

Thanks for all the feed so far though.
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Post by 16 Micz »

this is absolutely horrible......

LMAO....

na but atleast u tried...lol
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Post by Omega Bill »

Well, hopefully I'll elevate and get better. Thanks for the feed.

All feed is welcome weither you like it or not. If you don't like it just tell me what to change, I already know I gotta ride a beat, it's my first recording so I was seeing if I have the voice for rap. But yeah, thanks for the critcism, it's appreciated because it will make me strive to get better.
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Post by complexity »

Besides the fact that I couldn't understand half the words, it was monotone, obvious you were reading, no swagger or flow and whispered.

Not bad yo!
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

yea i remember this when u showed me b4,back up and put some emotion into it man! lool,if u backed up i bet those lil pops n shit wud be gone,move like 4 or 5inches back and then shout it like u mean it,that shud help a bit,and try memorizing it if u cant make it seem like ur not readin off paper,keep practicin man
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Post by Arvincible »

lol im probably getting a mic tonight lol uh oh hahahahaah
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Post by Viral »

this quality is HORRIBLE...it sounds like a bunch of basss distortion...n shitty treble rattling...n i got monitor speakers....which makes it sound even worse cuz it sends me the exact sound......u need mad mixing done to it...i couldnt understand a word....n it wasnt cuz ur fast..its cuz it was a bunch of white noise.....wen u release a track with clear vocals n wat not...then ill give u some real feed....if u want..ill mix it for u...i dont mind...jst hit me up....
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Post by Omega Bill »

Alright. I used Audacity, and I just did a quick-mix. I'm completely new to all of this. So I will need a lot of help, so I'll be hitting you up for help with my next track.
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Post by Viral »

word hit me up on AIM if u can...
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Post by Typeo »

sounds like you skipped words, what I could understand. speak clearer for one, gotta be able to pronunciate the shit if you wanna go that fast.
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