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Don't Worry Bout Structure

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 1:02 pm
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Don't Worry Bout Structure' The Site's Layout IS Diffrent Each One Is A Bar

My Written-Is-Phat, And The Way Im Hittin-This-Cat, Has Him Depressed! To The Point His Fat Ass "Breaks Down, And Reaches For A Donut" Like Fixin-A-Flat

Pay Me My Cash Or Im Smokin Up Any! And Both My Fingers Be Toking-Up-Semis! Otherwise Money Will Be A Link-In/Lincoin Your Death Like Choking On Pennies

Yur Wack, With A Bums Rage..Get Hit With A 12 Gauge..That'll Put You Through "Hellen Back Early" Like Anal Sex With Keller At A Young Age..

Leave You Shot In The Heart, KO You! Got'chu Lyrically Chizzled Apart, That'll Have You "Fed Up With Music" Like Britneys Ex At The Top Of The Charts

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:41 pm
by Arvincible
lol great punches i like the link-in/lincoln line it was great...

U should incorporate these kinds of lines and punches in ya battles or something with more purpose
you can show u have skills and show u have a direction with them. Keep it up though, im glad to see
ur stickin to ur word about stayin consistent. Props

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 4:45 pm
by MesaR
agreed the link in was dope good shit dude

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:26 am
by Haz
Yur Wack, With A Bums Rage..Get Hit With A 12 Gauge..That'll Put You Through "Hellen Back Early" Like Anal Sex With Keller At A Young Age..


LMAO!!!!.. "Hellen Back Early" Like anal Sex With Keller At a Young age

Witty Niggah lol


That'll Have You "Fed Up With Music" Like Britneys Ex At The Top Of The Charts

Good Way 2 End it u Bastard


Yo This Wus a Solid Punch Piece lol u Gott Pretty Witty wid it..

Stay Up & Stay Active

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:32 am
by Panama
Yeah good wordplay with that lincoln penny line... Lol... keep it up fam...

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:57 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
LOL thanks all for feed man, appreciate it

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:05 pm
by Meta-the-DEMON
That's what I like to see.... PUNCHES! Hahah.. props on the piece. Dope shit.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:34 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
HAHA...Word Love Da Feed Will Get @ Yu All When I Can

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:43 pm
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
UPPIN...

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:25 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
nice punches, the wordplay was dope too, good shit man

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:01 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Thanks Man...Good Looks

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 9:16 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Anyone Else?

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 12:39 pm
by complexity
All four of the punches was strong.

I have no complaints.

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 1:37 pm
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
LOL Props!

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 2:32 pm
by Omega Bill
Really good punches, great wordplay. You got real witty in your raps and punches with this one and it made em hit a lot harder.

Good drop.

(thought I replied to this one already, guess I didn't)