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Don't Worry Bout Structure

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Don't Worry Bout Structure' The Site's Layout IS Diffrent Each One Is A Bar

My Written-Is-Phat, And The Way Im Hittin-This-Cat, Has Him Depressed! To The Point His Fat Ass "Breaks Down, And Reaches For A Donut" Like Fixin-A-Flat

Pay Me My Cash Or Im Smokin Up Any! And Both My Fingers Be Toking-Up-Semis! Otherwise Money Will Be A Link-In/Lincoin Your Death Like Choking On Pennies

Yur Wack, With A Bums Rage..Get Hit With A 12 Gauge..That'll Put You Through "Hellen Back Early" Like Anal Sex With Keller At A Young Age..

Leave You Shot In The Heart, KO You! Got'chu Lyrically Chizzled Apart, That'll Have You "Fed Up With Music" Like Britneys Ex At The Top Of The Charts
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Arvincible »

lol great punches i like the link-in/lincoln line it was great...

U should incorporate these kinds of lines and punches in ya battles or something with more purpose
you can show u have skills and show u have a direction with them. Keep it up though, im glad to see
ur stickin to ur word about stayin consistent. Props
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Post by MesaR »

agreed the link in was dope good shit dude
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Yur Wack, With A Bums Rage..Get Hit With A 12 Gauge..That'll Put You Through "Hellen Back Early" Like Anal Sex With Keller At A Young Age..


LMAO!!!!.. "Hellen Back Early" Like anal Sex With Keller At a Young age

Witty Niggah lol


That'll Have You "Fed Up With Music" Like Britneys Ex At The Top Of The Charts

Good Way 2 End it u Bastard


Yo This Wus a Solid Punch Piece lol u Gott Pretty Witty wid it..

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Post by Panama »

Yeah good wordplay with that lincoln penny line... Lol... keep it up fam...
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LOL thanks all for feed man, appreciate it
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Meta-the-DEMON »

That's what I like to see.... PUNCHES! Hahah.. props on the piece. Dope shit.
All-time battle record 93-5

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HAHA...Word Love Da Feed Will Get @ Yu All When I Can
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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UPPIN...
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice punches, the wordplay was dope too, good shit man
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Thanks Man...Good Looks
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by complexity »

All four of the punches was strong.

I have no complaints.
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LOL Props!
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Post by Omega Bill »

Really good punches, great wordplay. You got real witty in your raps and punches with this one and it made em hit a lot harder.

Good drop.

(thought I replied to this one already, guess I didn't)
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