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The Day The Condom Broke

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.. In relationships, teenagers often take the risk ..
of being faced with kids, when the rubber breaks or splits
.. They embrace & kiss .. it's great and his ..
.. semen's pulsating quick, to taste her lips ..
Giving fate a twist .. it burst the barricade of Latex
.. So much for the apparent term of 'safe' sex ..
A million sperms now racing the final course
.. Along the vaginal walls, where life is born ..
The prize their fighting for, soon clear in sight
.. As the million white cells start veering right ..
Up the felopian tube; as its sides then spread
.. And each sperm looked to fertilise the egg ..
Finally one succeeds .. the racing's through
.. Encased in goo .. He'd found a place in her womb ..
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The Female
Recalling the night before, as he touched her breasts
Knowing they'd do nothing less, than succumb to sex
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That one wave of right, could change her life
She had a Gut feeling .. One that something lay inside
Late that night, she prayed beside her celtic cross
.. Hoping the pregnancy results had tested wrong ..
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The Male
Regardless of the previous night, & them being dead close
To the father, she was just another notch on his bed post
Music was his first love .. and his gift in the art
.. to exist with the stars, has them drifting apart ..
He told her flat out: "Girl, if you have the kid ..
.. then goodluck and all, but i wont play dad to it"
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The mother spent the next few months juggling her options
& decided when the time came, to put it up for adoption
This was the worst she'd felt. Having to give up her own son
.. But figured it was probably for the best in the long run ..
How wrong she was, the reason this is easy to state's cause
Ive witnessed this first hand. I was the child they gave up.
D'you know how it felt ?.. alone .. scared and worse,
Growing up in a hostle, no clue who your parents were?
Ive no beaming rays of light, Nothing here'll change my mind
They day the condom broke, was the worst day of my life.


Peace.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

shakes his head,i was gonna leave feed too..well 2 bad
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Post by NextKilla »

Stupit, Dats Mine From da otha forum.........don't accuse what u dnt kno
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Post by Omega Bill »

What about the other one? Is that you too on another forum?

So if I happen to have an account there and ask both people how they felt about their lyrics getting bitten they would just say. Hey, I'm NextKilla, right?
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

do it^cuz we kno he cant show proof besides 'its mine on this forum' blah blah
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Post by GOD »

We don't give the benefit of the doubt to newbs. That drop was made years ago.
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eh...true,nvm bill
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Post by MesaR »

thanks for dropping the peice, good read but your still a fucking biter.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

good stuff.. haha... u should've bit off me from one of my older drops.. it would've been harder to find
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Post by thaphantom »

well....dont't care who wrote it....i still liked it...props to who eva the origanl writer is...if it's u then it is...but highly doubt it untill the proof is shown
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Post by Arvincible »

Lol im not battlin biters mang, u have to prove its urs before u get any further on this site. Its hard to get through here but worth the experience gain, everybody here takes their writing seriously and if you come in here with shit like that u'll just get shitted on dude. We got a small community of strong voters and we help each other, true story. Lol u stay active... with that biting?! Ill battle u if u got proof this piece is urs. Other than that I don't want a cheap win man, I've been gettin a few of those lately.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

whats with the biters lately? it's like a plague.
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