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Haz
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Stuck in poverty poor Lil annabelle
facing her grandmas death sitting wishing nana well
dropping a rose for her brother whos bandana fell
to slugs from heat held by a thug whos street
annas brother was on his block selling drugs 2 eat
it wasnt his block so he got Shot then bagged
and thrown in a carriage something like shoping bags
anna needed a friend so she started copping bags
niggas wus droppin mags so she let um hit & split
so she could buy more drugs put it in her pipe & git it Lit
days went by a nigga spoted her roc that was a "lent high"
"you needa pay up" he aint mean money he Meant Pie..
no rubber she let um hit it still she hurda aids but ain no the shit is rill
soo she got checked by a doctor sittin still he told her the outcome of gitting drilled
now shes cryin goin bananas she studders i guess my fates like "Nanas & brothers"
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

it wasnt his block so he got Shot then bagged
and thrown in a carriage something like shoping bags
anna needed a friend so she started copping bags
niggas wus droppin mags so she let um hit & split
so she could buy more drugs put it in her pipe & git it Lit
days went by a nigga spoted her roc that was a "lent high"
"you needa pay up" he aint mean money he Meant Pie..

nice^reminds me of some joe budden '3 sides to a story' type shit..keep it up tho homie flow wuz good and didnt seem like u were forcin nething good shit

and aye if u cud leave some feed on the 'gettin over it' collab in the chamber
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i Got you. When i get Home from work i'll Leave u Feed
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Post by Omega Bill »

This does kinda sound like Budden, lol. I like these latest drops youve been doing man, they're really good.
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