crazy awakening (Part II)

[Arvincible]

I struggle still, in the red rugged hills,
that same feeling from murder thrills
but here i feel their cold souls of steel
mine they would also steal, im dealt a deal,
to become a melt for meals, this felt for real
So much for those golden gates...im now in the fiery hell
the scent of dripping flesh, fills the air with a dying smell
like zombies they approach me, i havent budged
I feel their guilt, their hatred and their life long grudge
coming close, i can almost hear their crave, for fresh death
Their minds cryin, with every move joined, with a gasp of breath
its getting nearer, tryna freeze my soul with darkness
it still lurks in me now, like an eternity of evil heartless
I scream....."the dream isn't over?!" i try to turn a shoulder
squirm and shake, but i just got dizzy as i rolled over...
I see them coming closer, their bloody palms hopin
they can grasp me, but miraculously....my eyes open.
I sit up, screamin "God what happened?"
but all i heard were crickets snappin and a fading voice of the devil laughin
is this my fate? my life doesnt pass through the desired gate?
will i pass through the burnt and end up hurt in a tired state?
i tried to relax. and lay back down, and let it go
if this buzzing in my head is true, ill have to wait to know...

But as my eyes shut....once more....i lay awake a while
and pray this mind, would give me a better take in life.

[Viral]

its a pretty solid piece...the story behind it is pretty dope...i like how u went about it...ur rhyme scheme was straight...coulda been alot better tho...over all i liked this...it was short...but sweet...keep it up

[Arvincible]

yeah i wanted to put something up, its been a couple weeks..thanks

uppin for feed

[Omega Bill]

Is this a sequel to the other dream one?

Good shit. Yet again, love the imagery and how it flows together and how you bring it all together.

Is there gonna be another?

[Arvincible]

I THINK SO...I HAVE ONE IN MIND BUT NOTHIN DOWN

[Omega Bill]

Good deal. Let me know when it comes up. N answer your aim, bitch, haha.