3 beats I made, just screwin around, tell me what you think.

[Omega Bill]

First 2 are techno, 3rd is more of a Rap beat. I don't spend a lot of time doing this, I just do it for fun when bored.

[Omega Bill]

2nd one.

[Omega Bill]

And the 3rd, which is more of a Rap/Hip Hop.

[-TraMaTiK-]

well im notta beat maker but i can tell u,u need some work,with what tho i aint gotta clue tho ask DJ for tips or whats good n bad..he'll prolly tell u whats what if he listens 2 these..but if its just outta boredom then idk lol

[Omega Bill]

Yeah I jus do it for shits and giggles. Im a horrible beat maker, these sounded the best though, lol.

[Momeijah]

The Techno Ones Sound Like u Used Loops And The Rap One Just Kinda Dragged On.

i Donno What u Made These On But u Should Download FL Studio. The Way i Set Up My Beats And Techno Tunes is With a Bass, Drumline, Rhythm And Lead Melody. Extras Can Be Thrown in Of Course But That's Like The 4 Main Elements. Keep at it Though.

[drunken jesus]

wow shit gave me a headache

[Omega Bill]

The best beat maker on the site just talks shit and doesn't give advice. Amazing.

[Viral]

personally the first 2...dat were posed to be techno...made me wanna kick myself in the face with an anvil...lol....the hip hop beat....was the best one.....n im glad ur not doing it on a serious note as u claim..cuz if u were serious id be forced to die of laughter...haha....regardless...all u can do is keep workin on it to get better.....wat r u using to make da beats?...

[Omega Bill]

FL Studio 7. Site I go to had a download of it, with a crack, so I downloaded it to mess around and just see how all this stuff works.

No, god no, if I was actually making beats seriously then I wouldn't have posted THOSE here cause even I know those are shitty, haha.

[Ambiguous Realm]

from an honest opinion... ur beats r almost as bad as ur lyrical content... but still not as bad as ur graphical work

[drunken jesus]

The best beat maker on the site just talks shit and doesn't give advice. Amazing.

wah wah, -you don't take your own shit seriously why should i? any constructive criticism you shrugged off as "oh i don't do this seriously" then you criticize me for not giving constructive criticism? i told you what i thought

learn how to construct drumlines, 3 basic elements kick, hi hat, snare, then learn how to loop a sample if your doing sample based production(most hip hop beats are sample based) or learn scales/chords and learn how to play melodys/basslines that are on key if your looking to do composition based production(most techno beats are composition based)

the 3 beats you posted all sounded like random sounds looped i don't have a magic crystal ball that can tell everybody thats wack at producing/writing why they are, i just take educated guesses when i notice some things people are doing wrong, its alot harder to give input when somebodys doing everything wrong

[2Short]

the mastering is f*cked up in that HH beat.. it aint actually a hip hop beat at all..

you got a lot of work to do if you want to make better beats.. if you don't, it's aight

[Omega Bill]

Nah man, haha. I was just fucking around in FL. I don't take beat-making seriously because I know I won't put forth all the effort needed to make a good one. That and it's just not for me.