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Politically Incorrect #5 - Turn The Page

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Belittle these people with riddles riveting rituals
riddle the imbeciles like riddlin in their noses, biblical
as moses, note this, spiritual psychosis with dope spits
lyrical, compose it like Mozart, wrote this with no heart
just focus and a cold start, till its broke down like a gocart
On the track, we are building ships as the flow departs
like noah's arch filled with myths that are thrown apart
the building sits in louisiana, which means its hit
leaving a chillin crisp wind, in our throats; fema splits
hop in our boats with only dreams n memories
never seen the enemy cuz we can't see the entity
through the screens of MTV, the streets are empty
no remedy, or vaccine which means this century
is the most dangerous historically, forgery
from the 18th, civil war seems to mean more to me
technically it hits Darfur everyday, read war and peace
can't breathe with forestry, can't see the enormity
when we believe the sorcery, divine and politically
the mind is literally, psychologically damaged;critically
we could kill the species and still not be granted humility
go on a killing spree and still not reach the planets ability
who could have planned this, if you believe in the christ shit
even the righteous know, we will always be in a crisis
that's what life is though, why bother to fight it
you might as well be physic, cuz that's how it goes
Last edited by complexity on Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by B-Bear »

Damn!

Vocab's outta this world, impressing! Flows really good! A lot of good concepts and u had me goin right from the start.. i just got one word fotr this.. sick!
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Thanks for the feedback.
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Post by Cee4 »

Yep! this was dope. flow was almost flawless and im jealous of your vocab.

This was my favourite part of your verse.

never seen the enemy cuz we can't see the entity
through the screens of MTV, the streets are empty
no remedy, or vaccine which means this century
is the most dangerous historically, forgery
from the 18th, civil war seems to mean more to me
technically it hits Darfur everyday metaphorically

pretty deep. it sounds like Nas at his best. Anyway i would give it a 10 but someone can always do better. 9/10
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wow you are on another level man.

respect.
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