Story Time (Take A Second to Listen)

[-TraMaTiK-]

'96 Rolled Around Tha Man Was Hit Then Restin
We Can Still Hear Tha Music But We Missin Tha Blessin
Get Rid Of Tha New Catz And Bring Back All Of Tha Old Onez
i'm Talkin Bout Tha Ones That Created Tha Flow Son
Sick Of Hearin Bout Tha Next "Big" Tha Next "Pac"
Waitin For A New Hit Ta Witness Tha Next Flop
in Tha Early 2000'z Err Body Was Gettin Tipsy Then Kwon Fell Off
Now We Listen Ta Tha Kidz Cry Yayo And Akon Tell Off

my fav part dude^..solid shit..flow was nice,i liked this when u sent me it on msn too..good shit keep it up

[MesaR]

got your message across witch was a good one, you have elevated alot my dude

Listen And Let Me Tell Ya A Story Kid
This Will Take Ya Back Ta A Time When Glory Lived

^ dope opener, one of my fav bars in this drop

it Was Once Upon A Time Not That Long Ago
Niggaz Rode Tha Beatz And Created Songz That Flowed

^ felling that to, rhyme's were abit sketchy though

Take it Back To Tha 90's When Pac Was Spittin A Blessin
Alwayz Seemed Like He Was Preachin So i'd Listen Ta Lessons

Alright, Depth was pretty good

'96 Rolled Around Tha Man Was Hit Then Restin
We Can Still Hear Tha Music But We Missin Tha Blessin

Ehh anit really liking this bar much bro

Get Rid Of Tha New Catz And Bring Back All Of Tha Old Onez
i'm Talkin Bout Tha Ones That Created Tha Flow Son

Nice, I Agree Wit that
Sick Of Hearin Bout Tha Next "Big" Tha Next "Pac"
Waitin For A New Hit Ta Witness Tha Next Flop

lol.. abit basic getting ya msg across tho

in Tha Early 2000'z Err Body Was Gettin Tipsy Then Kwon Fell Off
Now We Listen Ta Tha Kidz Cry Yayo And Akon Tell Off

Didnt Like this much

What Ever Happened To Chingy? Bet He's Chillin At Tha Holliday inn
Now There's A New Age Of Groupies So Wayne And J-Holliday in

didnt get this - explain

Lets Give it Back Ta Nas Cuz There's Only "One Mic And One Stage"
i'm Sick Of Seein Tha Phonies Makin Tha Front Page

a decent closer, sketchy rhyme and flow

overall not a bad peice

[complexity]

Nice drop and the execution was cool.

Props.

I don't feel like leaving much more feedback right now, but that's the main
thoughts on it.