Quick Spittaz

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jusa lil "Quick Spit" collab.... another booty one to yall prolly but oh well im still undergrad....


Luna (Fade)
we som quick spittaz, with som slick fingaz...
pill tricks wit triggaz cuz they som bitch niggaz...
we be heavy hittaz, u aint ready to get iz... (us)
real steady killaz, i kno u can already feel thiz...

GaToR
ima quick spitta the rymes just "flow"
n if u talkin bout quick spits u already "no"
im that boi wit the fast movin "tounge"
rymes get spit so quick theyll have u"hung"
words roll out so fast u cant "comprehend"
but the beats killa so u just try "to pretend"
the quick spit type shit is mostly what the fuck i "do"
wen otha mcs hear me they look like they aint gotta "clue"
n that nicca twista aint shit ill burn him like a "fiya"
spit 400 barz ina instance but still they call me a "liya"
dont know how i got this way but know i can "flow"
give me 3 mins n ill diss u her him her ya mom an ya "hoe"

Luna (Fade)
we som quick spittaz, with som slick fingaz...
pill tricks wit triggaz cuz they som bitch niggaz...
we be heavy hittaz, u aint ready to get iz... (us)
real steady killaz, i kno u can already feel thiz...

Luna (Fade)
iv been holdin back, still showin a stack //
in the back pack get flipped an hit back //
cutin no slack, nothin left of u thats intact //
fast to react an grab the gat an blat blat //
ull get stuck and stold on nigga hold on //
the flows on an on my dick these hoes on //
this pros gone and i dont no longer prolong //
the length of this whole song i jus go long //
yea my flows off but i still get these pros soft //
spitin cold frost, stuck ina cold front an zone off //
hard hittin spittaz theres no other equivalent niggaz //
we som ill figyaz an the rest are ambivalent hittaz //

Luna (Fade)
we som quick spittaz, with som slick fingaz...
pill tricks wit triggaz cuz they som bitch niggaz...
we be heavy hittaz, u aint ready to get iz... (us)
real steady killaz, i kno u can already feel thiz...

[complexity]

that was pretty good, i liked your first few bars the best fade
and the chorus was pretty good....

especially with it being quick, this was 7/10

hmm....gator needs some major work though