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Gutta .. No Disrespect.. Actually i Dont Give 2 Fuckz


I Alwayz See Cass Punchlines in ya Verses Son..

takin dem head shotz, like a camera man

Be More Original Dawg..i'll Leave Feed latah
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Post by Glamtrash »

Its not bad, not spectacular by any means, but not horrible.

Tha Way i Praise This Rap Shit You'd Think it Was God And i Was Catholic
i Pull Tha Gat With Practice Every Snub i Pull Will Make Ya Back Flip

^^ My fav bar, but still, not great.

I mean, I'm not saying I could do better by any means, but I've seen better.

It just had no..."oomph". lol.
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Put Steel To They Lipz So They Can Feel They Fate << Nice Openin Line

Some Of These Lames Are Fameless Hoz i Just Aim And Blow
They Couldnt Spit Crack if They Name Was Joe But i Let it Rain And Snow
^ a Lil Basic.. But Still showin Multis..

Comin From Tha Ratchet Man
i Blast it Man Put You inna Basket Fam Then Ship You Off Ta Pakistan < LoL Funny Line Jus Hope it Wusnt Subliminal LoL

Start Makin A Statement
We'll See How Quick Ya Reply While Ya Face in Tha Pavement << lol Good finishin line..


Ya Bars Wusnt As Basic As the Otha Guy Sed or Wuddeva.. u Hadda Some pretty Strait Bars..

Now Gutta....

i Dont Think this one was cassidy im Pretty Sure its Jada "takin dem head shotz, like a camera man "


Aiight Bar.. conceal tha tre, riding 24's till the fuckin wheels'll break..//
fuck tha Gov.. i dont appeal to the state, u kno its Burque when we reveal tha plates..//


I'm tha king of this rap shit, my flow so abstract, it, appears to you as magic//
Contract ya life, as I sit back and bitch slap ya wife, then put ya ass in a casket, for actin trife, damnit//
^^^^ Strait....

ThaGuyYouHate Killed this..
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Post by Gutta »

i didnt come hard cuz i didnt feel like it Ese, i didnt even finish mah verse cuz i been caught up... anyways good job TGYH


haz, that aint a fuckin jada line dawg

"so dey call em bed rocks...niggas is like photographers, all dey take iz head shots.."

did dat sound like my line??
think bout it before u make acusations homes
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Dawg Dont Make Me rip u a New Asshole.. All your punches Are Rearanged Jada Or Cass..
Shut da Fuck up and Fall Back Wanksta Ass Niggah U Dont Want it Wit Me
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eh Apu, does a fuckin camerman sound like a photographer??? nah u dumb mothafucka it dont. i used CAMERAMAN u illeterate piece of shit

not Photographer

Jada used "Photographer" i didnt bite off him

i didnt even think of his verse when i rote it till ya dumbass brought it up
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Post by complexity »

You played off each other great. I wouldn't consider that biting either.

Props for this cypher.
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Guttas Soft Man... i Think ima Dig him a Hole
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ya wateva u say u slurpee drinkin mothafucker
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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Re: TGYH & Gutta "Bar For Bar"

Post by Momeijah »

ThatGuyYouHate wrote:Just A Little Simple Bar For Bar...

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Kidz Needa Stop Frontin Before AKz Peel They Face
Put Steel To They Lipz So They Can Feel They Fate

Good Opener, Nice And Simple. Multis Were Solid And Flow Was Fine.

conceal tha tre, riding 24's till the fuckin wheels'll break..//
fuck tha Gov.. i dont appeal to the state, u kno its Burque when we reveal tha plates..//


Good Opener Aswell, i Like How ur Rhyming Off Each Other.

Some Of These Lames Are Fameless Hoz i Just Aim And Blow
They Couldnt Spit Crack if They Name Was Joe But i Let it Rain And Snow

Good Rhymescheme And Flow, Nice Little Punch Aswell.

get banged with chrome, kidz afraid to roam where ranges' roam//
the danja zone, we beasts untamed and rearrange ya brains and dome//


Like i Said Good Rhymescheme Here, Good Flow And Multis. Not Really a Punchline Piece But i Like The Way Both Of u Are Hyping Yourselves Up With The Gangsta Style.

Piranah Shellz That'll Eat Ya Head Comin From Tha Ratchet Man
i Blast it Man Put You inna Basket Fam Then Ship You Off Ta Pakistan

Same as What i Said To Gutta Above.

takin dem head shotz, like a camera man, your style is average, man..//
I'll put two in ya head, plus im a celeb, I belong in them candids, fam //


Yeah The Line is Played But ive Heard More Alternate Versions Of it Than Just Jadakiss So it's Not Biting.

Tha Way i Praise This Rap Shit You'd Think it Was God And i Was Catholic
i Pull Tha Gat With Practice Every Snub i Pull Will Make Ya Back Flip

i Wouldn't Consider The 1st Line a Punch, But u Have a Good Way Of Saying Things. u Could've Just Said 'i Love Rap'. Haha, So Yeah Nice Similie.

I'm tha king of this rap shit, my flow so abstract, it, appears to you as magic//
Contract ya life, as I sit back and bitch slap ya wife, then put ya ass in a casket, for actin trife, damnit//


ur Rakim influence is Showing, The 'Stutter Rhymes' (i Just Call Them That, When Ppl Use Half The Multi Then The Full Multi And Loads Of Rhyming Words) Are Dope And Make The Flow Smooth.

i'm Not Tryin Ta Argue i'm Just Here To Start Makin A Statement
We'll See How Quick Ya Reply While Ya Face in Tha Pavement

Once Again Good Way Of Describing Things. it's a Lot Better To Use ur imagination BUT Still Keep it Simple, Rather Than Just Spitting Some Blatant Boring Shit.
Overall Good Drop. There Could've Been More Punchlines But u Both Made Up For That Category With imaginative Lines. i Like Gangsta Shit, But The Creative Kind. This Was The Creative Kind. u Both Had Dope Similies, Nice Rhymeschemes And Multis Which Made The Flow Dope. id Like To See More Collabs From u Two, Keep Dropping.
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