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ballsdeep
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MY SECOND DROP CHECK IT OUT

Post by ballsdeep »

So I'll hunt you faggots down an choke ya with "Razor wire"
Cocaine Wars;I'm vicious,politicians payed off,I got "C.I.A suppliers"
Plantatoins in bolivia,Colder than any war,MORE FIRE POWER THAN CUBA
Run away, i'll line up ya family,And load up the Rugga(Rugger)
WHAT THE FUCK,somebody slap the head of state
Let him know its all sinking now and were way to late
Taser ya Achilles Tendon,And stick a Shark hook Through ya navel
Theres zero contending,sick hooks, Spin the turn table
Born on the black list,Risin higher than galactic
Make ya Back Twist,But this shit aint chiropractic
Just run an attack this,Savage Tactics
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Post by MesaR »

eh eh, well i didnt like this much expect for this bar

Born on the black list,Risin higher than galactic
Make ya Back Twist,But this shit aint chiropractic

^ that was pretty funny stay up emo kid
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Post by EZCome »

Meh so offense man but i wasn't feeling any part of this. (So i cant really say much)

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

eh... kinda weird.. i liked the hidden multi in the first bar.. not sure if that was even intentional tho considering u lacked it all in the rest... so it kinda lost my attention.. didn't like the word choice that much... but it wasn't horrible or n e thing..just could be way better
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