Tramatik & Rell Fiasco Collab - Victims Aren't We All

[-TraMaTiK-]

(tramatiks link) http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/r-fia ... t6489.html
(rells link) http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/trama ... t6422.html

collab rell & i did on msn,story line if u cant tell is 2 ppl talkin back n fourth bout the past,from prison & at home..leave some feed

its been a minute since u,me,and the boss talk
i still member the day they caught u @the cross walk
head in the ground,then suddenly u were headin 2 the pound
arms tied,ya charm died and eyes were cold
argued with the copz till they cud see the lies that were told

Ever Since That Day, i Feel Like i`m Dreamin`,
Wishin` That Mah Eyes Unclose ..... Now i`m Upstate,
Gotta Think all Day as i Lie in Mah Bed ..
Wit Guys above Mah Bed .... & When i Call Mah Daughter,
it Breaks Mah Heart `cus They Gotta Press 5 to accept ..
& Tha Pressure Sittin` in This Room Juss Lies On Mah Head ......

damn dawg i kno shits rough in the pen
but u gotta stay tough for ya men
for the homies,and especially ya lil daughter
cuz u dont want her seein the hatin and the slaughter
yesterday my pops got caught robbin a bank
cops shot @em,he musta been thinkin he wuz dodgin a blank
shit's fucked up cuz homie dropped and his eyes closed
i walked by n said'this from ya boi',n layed down a Rose.

.... Damn !! are U Serious? Pops That Use to Play 'round Wit Hoes ??
.. always Use to Tell Us to Use a Rubber or Lose ya Life ..
it`s Fucked Up Cops Had to Shoot His Life .. But ..
i`m Tryna Maintain, Keep an Open Mind, in This Closed Place ..
Like 4 Dudes Got Shanked Last Night, i ain`t Got No Faith ..
Tha Whole Day, i Been Stayin` Up Literally Watchin` Mah ass ..
`cus Even Tha Guards is Crooked,even if i Yell For Help They`ll Walk Right Pass ..

yea it was pops that said watch for the hoes
the one who said pick out some candy & we'd cop a few of those
snickers,M&M's and those reeses pieces
but i hope u stay alive n wont be as deceased as he is
i hear u sayin ppl gettin shanked n shit thats fucked up
ill pray 4 u on some gangsta shit u make it without luck
the guards always crooked they 'the system
watch ya ass homie,holla back,dont be a victim..

... Everyday i`m Tryna Hold On, Think Positive ..
But Some Days i Wanna Drink Vadka Clips ..
`cus Them Shots`ll Juss Put Me to Sleep,
& Tha`s Wat i Wanna Do For Tha Next Decade ..
Hold On, This Dude Tryna Phone Check Me, "Nigga i Said, Wait"
.. Now Back to Me & U .. How`s Karina Dude ??..
i Heard She`s Havin` ya Seed, i Wish Tha Best Of Luck ..
i`ll Talk to U Soon, Don`t Follow Me G Put ya Weapons Up ..

karnias good,her belly gettin big
almost hear the kickin in her belly from my kid
and ppl phone checkin u?hit em in they dome for disrespectin u
and ppl fuckin wut homie,just let it go,holla@me bro and let it flow
and ill stay true 2 my word n hold off the weapons
even tho shit gets thick n i gotta step in
the beef thas around,write back this ya fam
tramatik missin ya homie,hurry back damn..

i Would Juss Like to Give U a Brief Message about ya Friend That Stayed in a Cell ..
He Was a Good Kid, Would always Stay to Himself ..
But This is Finna Be Tha Same Pain That ya Felt ..
When ya Pops Die, Really Touched Rell, Made Tha Whole C-Block Cry ..
anyways, i Wanna Say i`m Sorry For Wat Happened `cus Shit i Care ..
Tha Life in Prison Wasn`t For Him, So He Tied a Rope around His Neck
& Kicked Tha Chair .. i Know He Was Suppose to Be Comin` Home in a Few Years
.. But Tha Dudes Here .. is Like Soup Here .. Really to Blend in & Mix Wit Gays & No Life ...
That Wasn`t For ya Man .. He Had to Take His Own Life ..

damn i cant believe it,u gotta be jokin
i mean,fuck he was just left there...chokin?
i didnt think he wud do this,or even consider it
cuz that man was smart,never named illiterate
wow im in shock what the FUCK DO I SAY?
this man was a good person,but now he's passed away
thanks 4 the info,ill sure pour out my thoughts
and let em kno the friendship we got cud neva be bought..

[-TraMaTiK-]

34views n no feed?hmm lol

[complexity]

I loved how you played off each other.

You also got deep as fuck. So big props on that.

".... Damn !! are U Serious? Pops That Use to Play 'round Wit Hoes ??
.. always Use to Tell Us to Use a Rubber or Lose ya Life ..
it`s Fucked Up Cops Had to Shoot His Life .. But ..
i`m Tryna Maintain, Keep an Open Mind, in This Closed Place ..
Like 4 Dudes Got Shanked Last Night, i ain`t Got No Faith ..
Tha Whole Day, i Been Stayin` Up Literally Watchin` Mah ass ..
`cus Even Tha Guards is Crooked,even if i Yell For Help They`ll Walk Right Pass .. "

Highlight.

My favorite from tramatik was probably his first and last verse.

[-TraMaTiK-]

thanks plex..uppin if anybody WANTS 2 leave feed lol

[16 Micz]

a very decent collab, the chemistry was there, and the storyline was pretty good,

Rell had some nice attention grabbing lines, but his flow threw me off, here and there, but his vocab, and creativity was definitely a plus in this collab


Tramatik had some nice attention grabbing lines as well, and a bit more simplistic rhyme scheme and vocab, but he was also creative with keeping the storyline together, overall this is a decent collab, i hate to say it, but ive seen better from u both, but keep it up.

[-TraMaTiK-]

thankz for the Fb micz

[SlickMex]

I liked this collab..
Both fed off of each other well..

The closing was so nice..

i Would Juss Like to Give U a Brief Message about ya Friend That Stayed in a Cell ..
He Was a Good Kid, Would always Stay to Himself ..
But This is Finna Be Tha Same Pain That ya Felt ..
When ya Pops Die, Really Touched Rell, Made Tha Whole C-Block Cry ..
anyways, i Wanna Say i`m Sorry For Wat Happened `cus Shit i Care ..
Tha Life in Prison Wasn`t For Him, So He Tied a Rope around His Neck
& Kicked Tha Chair .. i Know He Was Suppose to Be Comin` Home in a Few Years
.. But Tha Dudes Here .. is Like Soup Here .. Really to Blend in & Mix Wit Gays & No Life ...
That Wasn`t For ya Man .. He Had to Take His Own Life ..

damn i cant believe it,u gotta be jokin
i mean,fuck he was just left there...chokin?
i didnt think he wud do this,or even consider it
cuz that man was smart,never named illiterate
wow im in shock what the FUCK DO I SAY?
this man was a good person,but now he's passed away
thanks 4 the info,ill sure pour out my thoughts
and let em kno the friendship we got cud neva be bought..

Those 2 verse had a nice chemistry in its own..
Rell the whole suicide note thing was creative as hell..

Great collab..although time to time..Rells verse were written in a scheme that was to hard for me to follow..
I had to re-read it to get an idea of what he was doing..Great collab

[Prophet]

Wow..... Damn, I enjoyed readin the whole verse, bot Rell and Trama's verse were easy to read.
And the storyline was cool, overall this was a very nice collab, props to both of yall.

[Haz]

and ill stay true 2 my word n hold off the weapons
even tho shit gets thick n i gotta step in
the beef thas around,write back this ya fam
tramatik missin ya homie,hurry back damn..

i Would Juss Like to Give U a Brief Message about ya Friend That Stayed in a Cell ..
He Was a Good Kid, Would always Stay to Himself ..
But This is Finna Be Tha Same Pain That ya Felt ..
When ya Pops Die, Really Touched Rell, Made Tha Whole C-Block Cry ..

Datz Da Part I Lykd.. It Wuz Nice All Thru..

[Brah-Vo]

great chemistry.
rell has great use of language
and tramatik you made some mad verses.
props man. i wanna collab with either of u in the near future.