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... Rell.Fiasco Presents: Second Time around ..

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Don`t Call it a Comeback, i Been On Tha Pen & Pad Wit Writtens ..//..
alot Of Lames Wish They Had This Sickness, Bag Mad Sick Shit When ..//..
i Go off Tha Top, `cus i Had Spits Rippin`, Move Like Tha Speed Of Light ..//..
Wriitens is Stove Top, For Tha Heat i Write, Steep Spits i Get Deep On Mics ..//..
See i`m Like, Deadly Rivers, Flowin` Killa, & Harder Punches Than Winky Wright ..//..
Peep Tha Sight, Cover ya Eyes Or Juss Get Blinded By These Keys i Type ..//..
i Ride Beats, & Got a Road Rage, `cus it`s Known These Soft Herbs Get Missin` ..//..
Rippin` Off Jerks Spits Gettin`, Mad Amped `cus They`ll Get Tossed Worse Hits Splittin` ..//..
This Wordplay, Plays On Words, Tryna "Piece Together Mah Words" Like "Crossword Olymics" ..//..
Fact is, i impact Spits, "Rip Out ya Vocal Cords" & "Throw ya Voice Over" Like "Ad-Libs" ..//..
Mad Sick, From Wat Mah Throat is Stashed Wit, Brain Flowin`, i Happened to Be Mad Quick ..//..
Shoot a Lame, Wit a Scripture So Deadly, U Could Compare it to a Ruger Bang, Never Use Tha aim ..//..
MCs That`ll Step Will Soon Be Slain, Rode a Beat Perfectly & Cruise Tha Lane, Like Who`s Tha Mayne ??..//..
Makin` a Comeback Better Than Jay-Z From Retirement, Punches`ll Embedded Wit Fire & ..//..
Flames is Cold, Oxymoron Type Style ..
Sittin` Down `cus i Cant Stand Lames, in This No Seated Environment ..//..
Never Had a Dude Wit Nicer Punches, & Tha Raps So Mean, Blast Cold Keys ..//..
Rhyme Fast, No Speed ..
Manifested Brains, "De - Rell ya Thoughts" Like They "Subtractin` Tha Fiasco Breed" ..//..
Tryna Stand Up to Me, But U Have No Knees ..
U Should Juss Listen to Tha Truth He Spittin` ..//..
i Use Descriptions, & "Tie Words Together" as if They Was "Loosely Written" ..//..

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Post by complexity »

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i Go off Tha Top, `cus i Had Spits Rippin`, Move Like Tha Speed Of Light ..//..
Wriitens is Stove Top, For Tha Heat i Write, Steep Spits i Get Deep On Mics ..//..

Fact is, i impact Spits, "Rip Out ya Vocal Cords" & "Throw ya Voice Over" Like "Ad-Libs" ..//..
Mad Sick, From Wat Mah Throat is Stashed Wit, Brain Flowin`, i Happened to Be Mad Quick ..//..

Makin` a Comeback Better Than Jay-Z From Retirement, Punches`ll Embedded Wit Fire & ..//..
Flames is Cold, Oxymoron Type Style ..
Sittin` Down `cus i Cant Stand Lames, in This No Seated Environment ..//..

Tons of dope concepts, punches, and bars.

A nice comeback spit.

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it Was Good, Not The Best i Read From u. Some Nice Punches And Wordplay But Meh, Something Was Missing.... There Was Not Much Of an Edge, Somethin Aggressive Or Emotional. EVERY Drop Has These No Matter The Topic But That Was an Area u Were Lacking in This. Good To See u Back Though, The Flow And Multis Were On Point as Were The Punches. But All in All it Didn't Hit That Hard.

My Favourite Lines Were;

i Ride Beats, & Got a Road Rage, `cus it`s Known These Soft Herbs Get Missin` ..//..
Rippin` Off Jerks Spits Gettin`, Mad Amped `cus They`ll Get Tossed Worse Hits Splittin` ..//..
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Makin` a Comeback Better Than Jay-Z From Retirement, Punches`ll Embedded Wit Fire & ..//..
Flames is Cold, Oxymoron Type Style ..
Sittin` Down `cus i Cant Stand Lames, in This No Seated Environment ..//..
Never Had a Dude Wit Nicer Punches, & Tha Raps So Mean, Blast Cold Keys ..//..
Rhyme Fast, No Speed ..
Manifested Brains, "De - Rell ya Thoughts" Like They "Subtractin` Tha Fiasco Breed" ..//..
Tryna Stand Up to Me, But U Have No Knees ..
U Should Juss Listen to Tha Truth He Spittin` ..//..
i Use Descriptions, & "Tie Words Together" as if They Was "Loosely Written" ..//..


thought that shit was dope man, some ill ass shit in there dude fo reel.
nothin more to say about it.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Sittin` Down `cus i Cant Stand Lames, in This No Seated Environment ..//..
Never Had a Dude Wit Nicer Punches, & Tha Raps So Mean, Blast Cold Keys ..//..
Rhyme Fast, No Speed ..
Manifested Brains, "De - Rell ya Thoughts" Like They "Subtractin` Tha Fiasco Breed" ..//..
Tryna Stand Up to Me, But U Have No Knees ..
U Should Juss Listen to Tha Truth He Spittin` ..//..
i Use Descriptions, & "Tie Words Together" as if They Was "Loosely Written" ..//..

my fav lines..pretty good for someone who has written for a while
bout time u came back anyways, u should try a different style every one in a while tho
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GoodLookin` Out Everybody On Tha FB ..
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Uppin` ..
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