Vendetta 2.1

[Momeijah]

Babble...

Oh Domino? Yeah Bitch ive Got More Fans Than a Crowd-Of-Stars,
u? s'Like u Escaped From Jail The Way ur Running Out-Of-Bars.
im Loud-And-Large, Large And in Charge, i Own u Bitches, Call Me Sarge,
Blah Blah Blah, Here We Go Again, am i Babbling? Fuck Off im Warming Up Now Let's Get To The Damn Topic?

Word, Again-it's-a-Case Of Fags Like The irrelevant-Blayze,
Stealing Lines in Hope Of Reaching My Level-Of-Praise.
ill Severe-His-Veins, U SEE MY FUCKING RECORD? it's at The Left-Of-ur-Screen,
My Record-is-Gleaming, But These Days i Just Ain't Lettin-Out-Steam.
Blayze is Pathetic-And-Weak, ill Hit Him So Hard He'll Forget-How-To-Speak,
u Guys Shoulda Seen Me in March, i Had Battles, Like Seven-a-Week.
Few Months Before i Was Like How'd i Get Respect-in-This-Beeetch?
Put Me Up Against Other Textcees? ill Be Honest, im About Second-To-Three.
i Mean, Plex is Good, But Dude Acts Like He's Got a Fucking Fist-in-His-Ass,
And if u Ask Me Now, i Couldn't Tell u The Last Time i Listened-To-Rap.
What am i Doing With Life? Drugs, College, Waiting For Christmas-To-Pass,
im Busy But it's Not Fun, Now i See Rap is in My Fucking System-it-Has..
To Come Out, it's Like Jizz Yo, Sometimes im in The Mood, And i Have To Flush-it-Out,
And Make The Most Of How im Feeling, Ya Know? Get it Out, Just-Like-Now.
This Piece is Pretty Basic, Pretty True, i Donno if There's Any-Mettas,
it's Just a Freestyle, im Not Backspacing, Or Making it Any-Better.
Because i Don't Want To Beat Around The Fucking Bush And Lose My Mood,
This is How im Feeling, im Giving it Straight, Just Commentating Dude.
My Last Piece is Now Vendetta 2.0, And Yeah, This is 2.1,
i Had One Vendetta, And One i Called Vendetta, But it Fucking Sucked.
it Doesn't Matter How Good This is, Because Freestyles Are Unique,
And ive Just Raked a Shitload Of Grass, im Sunburnt as i Speak.
The Feedback On My Last Vendetta Was Good, But Yall Still Asking Questions,
Well Minos, i Listen To a Lot Of Rap Still, im Just More Of a Metal-Head,
B-Bear, i Hate Concentrating, i Have a Short Span in My Head That's Speckled-Red,
From Bloody Sunburn, Numbers, Once im Back To My Best, You'll Be Satisfied,
But The More i Write The Closer i Get To Recapturing My Tiger's-Eye.
Me And Mrs. Domino Are No More, But No ill Feelings it Was a Bit-Of-Fun,
No Long Term Shit, And She Was Shy, i Was Lucky To Even Hit-it-Once.
My Birthday is in a Week, And i Know im Getting a Load-Of-Weed,
So i Might Not Be On, And Btw Why Does Vodafone Keep Phoning-Me?
Yall Should Suggest a Topic For Me To Write, Because i Suck at Thinking Of Them,
i Mean The Story Was Good, i Can't Be Arsed Writing See Ya..



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Because i Don't Want To Beat Around The Fucking Bush And Lose My Mood,
This is How im Feeling, im Giving it Straight, Just Commentating Dude.

true^^

much more quoteables but i liked that..anyways tre nicely done at the end u seemed bored as fuck tho man lol...but besides that it was cool..multis as usual n ur describin shit n then why kinda like i am with this style im tryin..good shit tho..PeaCe

[Dead Silence]

this is a pretty tight peice from you liked the little intro haha
multies were nice
flow was good
structure was alright
overall 8/10

[complexity]

Dope man.

Very entertaining and some good disses and relevant content.

A few of the multis were off, but other then that it was good.

"Put Me Up Against Other Textcees? ill Be Honest, im About Second-To-Three.
i Mean, Plex is Good, But Dude Acts Like He's Got a Fucking Fist-in-His-Ass, "

Fuck you!

[B-Bear]

Agree, it's just dope..

Liked this one, no bullshitting about a serious topic, fuckin incredible right?! haha, i'm turnin soft dude..

anyway, i like your style, the way u write.. damn u sucka, u make me laugh!!

I enjoy reading your drops man, cause u always deliver at a high level, great quality.. lots of babble, but veeeery entertaining..

[Momeijah]

Thanks For The Feed Minions, ill Return The Favour.

Uppin. a Little More Feed On My Previous Drop Would Be Nice as Well Lol.

[134282]

...Numbers, Once im Back To My Best, You'll Be Satisfied...

Let me know when you get there...