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[lilblayze]

Im,RED-FLAGIN, red dickes, SAGGIN, RED-RAGGIN//(BLOODED!)
RED-TAGGIN, fuck FAGOTZ who GAGGIN,(on dickz) but keep BRAGGIN bout BODY-BAGGIN, but aint doin nuttin but TATTLIN//(snitchs)

But ima WRECK, any bitch dat DISRESPECT, grab da TEC//
Unloadin to dey NECK, ima VET, reppin ma SET to da DEATH//

Any bitch wanna say somthin different jus holla at ME, ill be HAPPY//
To rest a faggot right next to dey DADDY, on ma waist dats where da glock BE//

Ill let it go if a bitch wanna say SOMTHIN, i wont say NUTTIN//
Ill just put a bullet in yo belly BUTTON, if ur ass be FRONTIN//

3-55, fuckin reppin EASTSIDE, rollin wit us u best be down to RIDE//
fuckin around best not catch our EYE, or ur ass will straigh up DIE//

fuck all of u dat actin like dey CRIPPIN, or im goin to have to put da CLIP-IN//
goin get started now da thangs FLIPPIN, dats y ur ass be DRIPPIN//

im done wit ur faggot ass get lost, SCAT//
done wit dis freestyle, BBBBBBBLLLLLAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT//




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