The Secrets Of The Eye

[-TraMaTiK-]

the deepness of the eye can show somethin sinful and cold
yet also unfurls a story and are like windows 2 the soul
the color represents the beauty and passion
but sometimes anger rages or love unfurls ever-lastin
these mysteries can be covered up but just think
what will u see the next time u look @someones eyes n blink?

[*.HarleQuin.*]

nice use of vocab and multies
i think u were trying to make this seem deeper than needed
but i liked the emotion, short sweet and to the point

[-TraMaTiK-]

ehh..i juz thought what came 2 mind 2 be honest..but ty 4 the feed..uppin