Though I...

[Young K]

I did this in audio today its pretty hott...
Ill post in Monday...(Week Rule)

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post50829.html#50829

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Though i see death coming, fuck it i aint running, fuck it i am something, though im stuck in this dungeon.

If i should die, before my son is born, i apoligize for leaving you trapped inside this storm.
Im torn, im twisted, im soaring, get lifted, im gifted, but yourself and i arent that different.
Except im on level, beyond limitations, its me against the world, and im in my room pacing.
Like damn, my sons gonna inherit my sins, and god forbid him ever knowing where ive been.
What ive done, thats my son, and ill always be here, even if im gone and forgotten, i'll always be near.
I'll help you see clear, when your stuck in the dark, struck in the heart, when it rains ill be your ark.
Think sharp, never trip and never let up, and if they give you the stage, Young K just step up.
Im dead up, even if me dying is unlikely, i still dont want you growing up, to be just like me...

Though i see death coming, fuck it i aint running, fuck it i am something, though im stuck in this dungeon.
Though im stuck in the dark, i know where i should be, free, imagine me, free, KG.
You probably know my name, but you dont know my pain, im not just stuck in the dark, im also stuck in chains.
Im insane, but im to blame, and thats no lie, though i, th-th-th-though i...

Though i see death coming, imma let him come, imma never run, cuz i just aint the one.
If thou shall be done, then i shall be done, i love my girl and damn right that i love my son.
I love my mama, i love my friends and family, r.i.p. pops, and fuck the rest of humainty.
This is just me, i am who i am, i am what i am, seeing clearly no lens.
Speaking through my pen, but it makes no sense, i do this to do it, not to make no cents.
No dollas, no nothing, i dont want nothing, you dont want nothing, come on K you frontin.
I dont want the fame, i just wanna be me, i do want one thing, not the fortune i wanna be free.
I wanna see me, just chillin no lie, looking in those skys, but though i...

Though i see death coming, fuck it i aint running, fuck it i am something, though im stuck in this dungeon.
Though im stuck in the dark, i know where i should be, free, imagine me, free, KG.
You probably know my name, but you dont know my pain, im not just stuck in the dark, im also stuck in chains.
Im insane, but im to blame, and thats no lie, though i, th-th-th-though i...

Though i know right from wrong, i gotta get by, i got better things to do, then to get high.
This is just my life, but its in rhyme, and my mama said that im walking a thin line.
So that got me thinking bout writing a will, one day we'll all be gone, everything will.
Thats real, but its still not scaring me, im not just acting diebo, but they still think i need therapy.
But i dont need it, Kirk why are you lying, cuz i dont give a fuck and i gotta heart of a lion.
Me and G are still trying, but things are way harder, shits fucked up, hes even moving to florida.
But we still have no worries, and im still in my zone, and its aiight i know they left me on my own.
All alone, but it dont matter no more, cuz i see death coming, fuck it i aint running...

[Young K]

yea thanks appreciate the feed

[B-Bear]

Leaves me with a feeling of you being very honest in this piece.. I like that

Can def see this becomin an audio, it'll prolly be a lot better in audio then as a scripture (considering the lyrical part)

Your structure was a lil inconsistent, but i didn't find that a problem concerning the flow because of the length of the bars..

Content was pure, like really honest in my opinion.. if u manage the delivery on audio, i can see this become a banger..