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New Beat W/ Hook

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this is only a preview not the whole thing, check it out tell me what u think, probably my 2nd best beat....originally sampled by romey rome
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pretty nice, the vocal clips need turned down just a tad in the verse section though
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Post by B-Bear »

it's all good, except the piano.. could've been more smooth.. sounds a bit choppy like ding-dang-dong.. lol.. one tone at a time instead of makin it all flow together.. other from that it's a tight beat
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Post by B-Bear »

drunken jesus wrote:pretty nice, the vocal clips need turned down just a tad in the verse section though
naah, don't agree.. u could def use the sample as the hook and just put ya own voice over it and the end.. that sounds tight.. like diverse did on that dreamin track..
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Post by drunken jesus »

hence why i said the "verse" section not the "hook"
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Excellento
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Post by Viral »

pretty straight beat....like the sampled vocals n wat not...the piano play was pretty nice..altho for some reason during the verse it seemed a lil odd...but overall its good...keep it up
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