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Quick cypher/keystyle type thing

Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 10:09 am
by ~*Blitz*~
Blitz = Underlined
Tramatik = bold



I'm just a human, I got good intentions, but I make some bad fucken decisions
Fucked up my life but I'm getting back on track with high expectations and visions/


the stress-n-the pain, from tryna be the best in the game/
got me on my knees prayin,without a vest ta complain/
that i needa heart healin b4 i can start feelin/
like my life is worth something and i shudnt be concealin


I know I've done wrong and the apologies have been sent
I cant change the past , Now it's just a buncha shit I resent/
Been through some shit recently - It was a mind changing event
Living up to my actions and fixing my problems has me feeling content/


in this trouble mind,i had'ta huddle and find/
a solution ta the pollution b4 it doubled in crime/
a life so krazy,filled with strife its amazes me/
that i havent been 'dropped' like that DJ on Shady(eminem fired a dj)//


I tried so hard to resist the knife, Fuck suicide, I gotta new twist on life/

does it make sense,we gotta have a defense/against the suspense of our past tense//

Im finally at peace with who I am, Realized I've got a life worth living
So I wanna thank god for pulling me through this and for being so damn forgiving /



This was something we did quick really outta boredom... Some feedback would be nice

don-t-take-her-away-verse-1-vt5068.html < tramatiks link
lyrical-talent-vt5192.html < my link

Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 1:05 pm
by RH1NO
this was pretty on point for a quickey structure n flow was off but it was straight good job guys

Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 8:43 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
thanks homie...uppinnn