Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Quick cypher/keystyle type thing

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
~*Blitz*~
Illest # 1 Liar
Offline
Posts: 718
Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:13 am
Wins: 9
Losses: 2

Quick cypher/keystyle type thing

Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

Blitz = Underlined
Tramatik = bold



I'm just a human, I got good intentions, but I make some bad fucken decisions
Fucked up my life but I'm getting back on track with high expectations and visions/


the stress-n-the pain, from tryna be the best in the game/
got me on my knees prayin,without a vest ta complain/
that i needa heart healin b4 i can start feelin/
like my life is worth something and i shudnt be concealin


I know I've done wrong and the apologies have been sent
I cant change the past , Now it's just a buncha shit I resent/
Been through some shit recently - It was a mind changing event
Living up to my actions and fixing my problems has me feeling content/


in this trouble mind,i had'ta huddle and find/
a solution ta the pollution b4 it doubled in crime/
a life so krazy,filled with strife its amazes me/
that i havent been 'dropped' like that DJ on Shady(eminem fired a dj)//


I tried so hard to resist the knife, Fuck suicide, I gotta new twist on life/

does it make sense,we gotta have a defense/against the suspense of our past tense//

Im finally at peace with who I am, Realized I've got a life worth living
So I wanna thank god for pulling me through this and for being so damn forgiving /



This was something we did quick really outta boredom... Some feedback would be nice

don-t-take-her-away-verse-1-vt5068.html < tramatiks link
lyrical-talent-vt5192.html < my link
User avatar
RH1NO
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2184
Joined: Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:55 am
Wins: 25
Losses: 20

Post by RH1NO »

this was pretty on point for a quickey structure n flow was off but it was straight good job guys
User avatar
-TraMaTiK-
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2046
Joined: Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:59 am
Wins: 6
Losses: 17

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

thanks homie...uppinnn
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazon [Bot] and 5 guests