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Forgive Me father
Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:00 am
by Street Pharmacist
Well i havent droped nothin in this section in a while,my mic still sounds fucked up so dont mind that listin to the words and give me feed back.
Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:50 pm
by Lawgix
loved the beat... flow kinda fell off... lyrics were okay... overall 4/10...
Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 12:03 pm
by SlickMex
Yea Hard Hearin Em..But They Were Good For The Most Part..Get Cool Edit Pro N You Can Make It Sound Decent..
Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:06 am
by Street Pharmacist
aii good looks on that ^^
Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:18 am
by Subsist
Its really good , you need minor fixes to your flow...your emotion is really good , need to get yourself a better mic
Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:28 am
by Gutta
damn dawg. i agree with Lawgix on this one the beat was ILL. i like the way u rap fool cuz the shit u spit is deep man i thought it flowed fine man. keep it up nigga
Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:59 am
by Dead Silence
yeah if ur mic was better than it would be better but i like the lyrics they seem liek they came from the heart ya no and i like the flow for the most part
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:54 pm
by Young K
Lyrics were really good...
Flow was on point...
It was pretty good for the most point