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Post by Street Pharmacist »

Well i havent droped nothin in this section in a while,my mic still sounds fucked up so dont mind that listin to the words and give me feed back.
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Post by Lawgix »

loved the beat... flow kinda fell off... lyrics were okay... overall 4/10...
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Post by SlickMex »

Yea Hard Hearin Em..But They Were Good For The Most Part..Get Cool Edit Pro N You Can Make It Sound Decent..
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

aii good looks on that ^^
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Post by Subsist »

Its really good , you need minor fixes to your flow...your emotion is really good , need to get yourself a better mic
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Post by Gutta »

damn dawg. i agree with Lawgix on this one the beat was ILL. i like the way u rap fool cuz the shit u spit is deep man i thought it flowed fine man. keep it up nigga
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Post by Dead Silence »

yeah if ur mic was better than it would be better but i like the lyrics they seem liek they came from the heart ya no and i like the flow for the most part
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Post by Young K »

Lyrics were really good...

Flow was on point...

It was pretty good for the most point
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