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Albino immigrants aint got the hue ta bruise me
i got Bazookas n uzi's blastin on bitches will soothe me
wearin Chinchillas in winter n the sleeveless when its hot out
but Dont test when the temp rises no patience fo ya smart mouth
you Eat up my lines like im spittin at ethiopians
jus Forget about votes ill jus seize ya throat ta win
got Grenades thrown makin pieces outta ya frame n dome
wit Hot shrapnel blowin away ya lines you shoul leave the game alone ...
Intermission... ya vocabs intermittent
wont test my lines cuz ya scared a commitment
actors like Jim carrey aint got shit on this like the movie
ya aint got money cuz ya chasin a pigeon
you canKiss my ass n respect my balls and my word
n jus Lick a ass neck dont even talk ta the bird
im stylin Magenta shades n rose glasses filled wit purple sprite
when Night fades on a tight fade ya ho's ass looks like turtles fightin
show me my Opponents watch em leave forums when i demolish their light flop
this Piece was written out of boredom its either a miss or a tight drop
but never Question my talent n im ballin like a.i.
in the paint Reboundin aint shit ya need a high scorer if ya wantin ta slay guy
ill Slap ya in the mouth n put ma foot in ya asshole
the verse wit Tabasco is fire but its turned out to be the root of a fiasco
im Uppercuttin n throwin bows jackie chan kicks that broke ya nose
ill be Victorious over foes when i blow lyrics swollinn ya toes
fuckin Winds whippin got the branches n leaves shakin
takin X-ray ya bitches belly n see a side a ranch wit cheese n bacon
asian Yellow cats is short but i stay chink eyed when i
Zero in on cats wit infrared n leave ya wit pink eye


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56 views and 1 reply lol
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Post by complexity »

Creative idea. The flow was on point sometimes and not others.

The lyrics were worded better than your other drops.

As the flow went on the lyrics started to make less sense though.

Like "toes fucking".

Not the best I've seen from you but not the worst either.

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appreciate the feed this was real fast n i tried ta jus spit shit out as the line ended and the letter changed n type it out at the same time..lol

and it should be like toes/ fuckin
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Post by 16 Micz »

drop a fuckin link bitch
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^^ cut out the bitch shit real quick
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