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Part Of My New Song

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leave sum feed plz..id like 2 no if im on the right track or not..highly apperciated..
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uppin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

it didnt work, it said the track your tryin to download does not exist anymore
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hmm ill try again
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ok ill try it 2 lol
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

works fine 4 me now so idk man lemme no whats up
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Post by 16 Micz »

definitely too low man...but the beat is pretty dope...lol and from what i heard at the beginning it was pretty good, you seemed to stay on beat, and had a nice flow with the beat...but make the recording louder cause it was pretty hard for me to hear u
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

word..it was kinda like a sample 4 myself and i wanted ppl 2 hear so i kno if im doin it right or not...but ill keep that in mind..thanks man...uppin
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Post by SlickMex »

Yo send it to me on msn if u can [email protected] cuz it dont work.
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Post by Momeijah »

Lol Turn ur Fucking Volume Up. Stayed On Beat Well, Lyrics Were Good And The Hook (if it Was The Hook) Was Pretty Solid Aswell. Just Make The Noise The Right Level Lol
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah this was an aight piece to me, nothin to special lyrically i thought, a lil more emotion and a lil more volume on your voice, speak up and step back from the mic..... keep at it though homie
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word..thanks
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