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I remember Back in the Day, when it was all about Crackers -n- Cake,
Didn't give 2 shits about Stackin that Weight, playin Batman wit Capes,
Games to Stare at the Sun, Double Dare was the Pun, Carin bout None,
Never Sharin yuh Gum, playin Cops -n- Robbers Barin the Guns,
Forever Stamina Runnin Wit, no insight of the problems in Americas Government,
Our Characters Punishment, is when scary movies are Scarin Yuh and Duckin In,
Yuh Blankets, Misbehave -n- getta Spankin, then 2 minutes later its Painless,
Finger Paintin, when thoughts were Vacant, playin tag in the dark of the Basement,
Wit only the Flash Lights, no cares until you getta call for Snack to Nap Time,
Bein Selfish like “Hey, That's Mine!â€
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UppIN 4 Feed
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

lmao @ the new fuckyourself trend

aw reading this drop brought back my memories, being a kid is so fun

anyway i liked how you rhymed shit and you stayed on topic really well. This was an intresting drop and a cool topic. I didnt get bored reading it or anything so good job to you

The only time you got high was on the Swing Sets, could comprehend to Think Yet,

^^ hawt line and my fav
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

dope shit, definitely can relate to this.. clips of my past flashed by as i read it.. good shit yo... keep droppin as always... and HURRAY! for the link
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thanx you guys for the feed, i figured i would try somethin new.

the feed is appreciated
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Post by Lawgix »

yeah dude i had visions of my childhood flash in my head while readin this it was tight man... no doubt i relate to this very well cause i did half of that shit that u talked about lol it was good

8/10
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Damn am i stuck at a 8....
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty good, i see your definitely stepping your multi game up, not the best piece i've read from you, but you stuck to the topic pretty damn well and you were pretty descriptive but still rhyming constantly..but i'd give it an 8/10 nothing i think can be quoted but definitely..overall nice..keep it up

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Post by Momeijah »

i Agree With Everyone Above, it Was Thorough And The Multis Were ill. Good Descriptions And imagery, Deffo Got Nostalgic Haha. i Liked The..



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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed Dom, yeah that was one of my fav lines as well.

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