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Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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~*Blitz*~
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

I liked the rhyming and I liked the topic and what you wrote through out this piece. I was definatley feeling it. You should drop pieces like this more often. I think the begining was my fav, good job doooood


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Spoof
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committin old crimes you just killin ya own kind
i know its a fact that i hold mine

fuck gangs abolish old clans
no homo shit but brothas needa hold hands
^^^^true true

I liked those lines tha most, nice drop man, I was feeling it and it flowed and all that, good stuff keep it coming
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now its time to fight tha streets
ill drop my hands while i fight for peace

hard ass line bro.. fire
whole thing was nice good message n emotion
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