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Where I stand #11!/I Stand Here Vol #4

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Micz: Red
Complexity: Yellow

[Hook]
its demonic but ironic my process is electronic
modernized sonets produced like economics
( WOAH)
I continue the legacy, and rip apart enemies,destroy your destiny
name an emcee that is next to me, only the niggas that rep with me

(DAMN)
[Hook]

i repeat we are going to war for no reason
which i dont believe in so call my flow treason
or give me a real meaning of our own freedom
when our soldiers should be at home eating
instead families are on Cnn getting shown grieving
our country is still battling our old demons
the streets are still dangerous I see no changes
cant afford living arrangements with low wages
fox news is so racist n its a leading broadcast
we still got facist deacons teaching gods path
while children are sleeping and getting shot at
cuz they saw the place their mom bought crack
and we still talk smack on almost every track
so kids at ten got their ghatz already packed
getting target practice for the upcoming draft
we taking america back right from the past

[Hook]
the author of "Where i stand", was probably the greatest man
(greatest man) (greatest man) since..
micz decides to smash a beat, ill let these bastards speak
(bastards speak) (bastards speak)

[Hook]

we live life in depression, and watch money motivate these people
blame the president for oppression, walk the streets and see evil
we can fight through the mics,the lives,and everything we write
most of us went to sleep in peace, that levee breaking night
how would u feel wakin up in the streets, considered nothin but theives
witnessing police bustin their heat, no air forces or j's touchin ya feet
you see, guns are nothing but destruction to me, everyone is thuggin
violence they love it,til someone gets bloody, then their hopin for peace
if we jst open our eyes, we can witness things that can change lives
whether it be watching kids swing, or seeing bloods throwin up gang signs
we spend time listening to a preacher, his words are our leader
its funny, cause a mouth can feed a prostitute and a teacher
but with the ears, we can give purpose to the mic and a dream
wasting our time and energy, just trying to fight enemies
now we've reached a whole, the more we teach we'll grow
failure to the weak's a foe, but to the strong, stand tall and reach your goal


[HOOK]
WHERE I STAND-I-STAND-I-STAND
WHERE I STAND-I-STAND-I-STAND
[HOOK]

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or give me a real meaning of our own freedom
when our soldiers should be at home eating
instead families are on Cnn getting shown grieving
our country is still battling our old demons

and we still talk smack on almost every track
so kids at ten got their ghatz already packed

WOOOOOO!!!!!

that was pretty dope man...lol ever heard someone say somethin, that gave u chills, thats what this did...touched some pretty good topics and so forth...loved every line of it man....who knows..this can be a classic..
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nah not even unless me and ghost get a classic lol.. overall it was pretty decent... probably the best of micz.. i've seen way better from tom
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i liked the first hook alot, it was dope

the streets are still dangerous I see no changes
cant afford living arrangements with low wages
fox news is so racist n its a leading broadcast
we still got facist deacons teaching gods path

and we still talk smack on almost every track
so kids at ten got their ghatz already packed
getting target practice for the upcoming draft
we taking america back right from the past

^nicest lines from Tom, big ups man

we live life in depression, and watch money motivate these people
blame the president for oppression, walk the streets and see evil

we spend time listening to a preacher, his words are our leader
its funny, cause a mouth can feed a prostitute and a teacher
but with the ears, we can give purpose to the mic and a dream
wasting our time and energy, just trying to fight enemies
now we've reached a whole, the more we teach we'll grow
failure to the weak's a foe, but to the strong, stand tall and reach your goal

^^^ best from Micz in this one, big ups kid

Tom pretty much held this one up for yall, but Micz came up on this one, Id give this a 7.5/10
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

Where the fuck is all the FEED - you lazy bastards

Reading this gave me chills...you guys did a good job. Stayed on topic nice and all the content was truthful and made its point. I wish it woulda been longer though...I enjoyed this piece alot. Good job to both of you

And who the fuck keeps track of what number and volume and such for each piece, i feel bad for you lol
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Post by SlickMex »

Yea it was a nice drop..i haven't been able to see a lot of drops from Complex so i cant say this is his best or seen better..but his part was one worth readin..Micz had a nice verse also..flow was nice..The first hook was by far the best one..
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