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Batman aka Blaze - I will never change

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Please go back and fix as many of your old songs as you want.
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Batman aka Blaze - I will never change

Post by Batman »

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5091145


Give me some feedback please. By the way the guy I'm rapping about is solo lol


peace
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Post by Onediversekid »

Hmm dont' know what to say man, your rhymes Are Okiie, your Flow Is Okiie, Your Just Okiie. Maybe You Should Just Stick With Hiding In The Bat Cave
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Post by complexity »

I think he asked for feedback to this drop. Not him as an emcee.
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Post by Subsist »

It was good, flow was just a bit off at a couple of places but it doesnt matter much. And it does have replay value. If only you could raise the volume of the beat some more.
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Post by Kawnvikt »

It was good and was put together well, but I think you really need to upgrade your vocab and throw more emotion into the song
I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Batman »

thanks for the feedback
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