a nerds story

[fuck haters]

nerd-rap

yo everyday i go to school i get pushed and shoved//
but when i put on halo live i just turn into a thug//
i can let loose my anger and really get pissed//
but when i pwn a newbie yo hes gonna get dissed//
i really love da fact dat i can hide behind da mic//
halos much more dan a hobbie its my whole fuckin life//
i use combos in game so try to sew me//
but if you use it and win im callin you a newbie//
you might slay me 5 times but dat aint nothin//
i use a stradegy called da stand by button//
im safe in my room i get beat up in da street//
my favorite google search term is halo2 cheats//
i got my xbox version and im ready for war//
in real life im a loser in halo ima 44//
ima white button thug im kursin people out//
you would think i was crazy by the way i scream and shout//
im mashin all the buttons im really gettin pissed//
on halo ima god in school im gettin dissed//
i dont fit in at school dese people think ima nerd//
but when i swing it online im gonna flip up you birds//
i use my words as weapons cuz my fist dont work//
so im gettin my ass kicked and doin peoples home-work//
but when i get back at home you know its time to get killed//
ima pull out da controller and bomb up a kid//
in real life i might hide and duck//
but when we playin halo2 i aint scared to say you suck!//

that was a nerds story!

[MesaR]

i got my xbox version and im ready for war//
in real life im a loser in halo ima 44//

LOLOLOL

[B-Bear]

this was sorta up and down.. had some good lines.. some funny shit like

i use my words as weapons cuz my fist dont work//
so im gettin my ass kicked and doin peoples home-work//

i got my xbox version and im ready for war//
in real life im a loser in halo ima 44//

it's a good idea in my opinion, but i didn't catch the humour in a lot of it..

and u messed up ya flow sometimes..

but when i get back at home you know its time to get killed//
ima pull out da controller and bomb up a kid//
in real life i might hide and duck//
but when we playin halo2 i aint scared to say you suck!//

try and keep a more consistent rhyme scheme..

[fuck haters]

thanks but it really wasnt serious it was like a quick joke!

[B-Bear]

was what i thought.. but left some feedback nevertheless..

[fuck haters]

nah it wasnt mines heres where it came from just give it time to start!
its alot better on audio!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgdwkLYaBI8

[~*Blitz*~]

lol so im confused, did he write this or not?