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Bring a loss to the weak, even Amen Ra got lost in my heat
Coz all these other rappers are 'falling off' like frostbitten feet
I'm chopping the meat, the fakers getting smashed too easy
I'll have them 'seeing stars' like swearing on captioned TV
Have to ask to see me, got more queues then pool hall storage
And for me 'beef is rare', because I'm just too raw for it
Who would've thought it, a rapper too profound to think
While the rest are like drying rags, they're out of sync
I'm crowned the king, while they're being bashed and roasted
Coz I'm leaving caps all over the floor, like angry coaches
They getting stamped like postage, while my delivery is flawless
They're unaware of my danger, like couriers delivering a hostage
Have them in misery and soreness, like items on the world news
Because pulling my plug will only make a stronger whirlpool
I hurl fools, they getting mowed for walking on the wrong turf
Coz they 'ain't been heard', like trying to talk when at a concert




Laying it down on audio next time I get a chance to record...for a collab...

Leave feed, I'll rtf...
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...When Death Sleeps, It Has Nightmares Of Me...

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...I Fuckin Own You...1

"Look At The Facts...Thats Astoundin
They Took The Smartest Of The World;
And It Took A Hand To Count Em"


...People Who Hate Their Life Don't Deserve To Have One...1

"Fuck The Religions, Fuck The Politicians
I Choose To Make, My Own Damn Decisions" -Kruwl

"It's A Paradox; Everything You Preach Becomes Nonsense
The Very Second You Started Mixing Religion With Logic" -TT


...124-8 (99 KO's)...1
...And Still Countin...
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

I'm chopping the meat, the fakers getting smashed too easy
I'll have them 'seeing stars' like swearing on captioned TV

haha loved that part^^ but it was nice man wanna hear it on audio
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Post by B-Bear »

Have to ask to see me, got more queues then pool hall storage
And for me 'beef is rare', because I'm just too raw for it

nice line mr thinker..

overall a nice drop man.. def liked it, had some good similies in it. .. flow was good! keep it up man..
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Post by complexity »

Nice wordplay. Maybe a little to much. Good job though.

"I'm crowned the king, while they're being bashed and roasted
Coz I'm leaving caps all over the floor, like angry coaches"
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

Nice drop, the content was dope - Yes I wanna hear it on audio to and lets see some more writtens from you! Good Job thinker
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Post by Thinker_Thought »

Word thanks for the feed...I'll try get it recorded tomorrow if I get a chance...
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...When Death Sleeps, It Has Nightmares Of Me...

Image
...I Fuckin Own You...1

"Look At The Facts...Thats Astoundin
They Took The Smartest Of The World;
And It Took A Hand To Count Em"


...People Who Hate Their Life Don't Deserve To Have One...1

"Fuck The Religions, Fuck The Politicians
I Choose To Make, My Own Damn Decisions" -Kruwl

"It's A Paradox; Everything You Preach Becomes Nonsense
The Very Second You Started Mixing Religion With Logic" -TT


...124-8 (99 KO's)...1
...And Still Countin...
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Post by urbanhistory »

They getting stamped like postage, while my delivery is flawless
They're unaware of my danger, like couriers delivering a hostage

^^ haha that was tight overall a good piece everythin was on point keep droppin
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Post by precise »

this piece was dope as hell, went nuts with the punches, impressive

make sure ya post it up on illest once its recorded
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty dope shit thinker, u seem like a real punchline rapper, and thats cool...im feeling this, your flow is a lil dull but other than that this is pretty dope

fav line:"I'm crowned the king, while they're being bashed and roasted
Coz I'm leaving caps all over the floor, like angry coaches"
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