Tha Gift..

[MesaR]

decent drop..

It Flowed But In Some Places It Kinda Feel Off
Nice Emition i would of liked to see you put abit more in
First Part Was Simple Lyrics And Kinda got more lyrical near the end anyways not bad at all PcE

[~*Blitz*~]

tha visions were simple like food on tha table
thats when i realised i was livin reverse from tha grave to tha cradle
even as a young cat i hadda live tha plans
thats when i realised life is tha gift God gives to man...

^^ fav part

Nice drop overall, I liked the scheme u had going on here and the rhyming was cool - good job

[SlickMex]

Yea man..that was nice..ending was tyte with the grave to the cradle..keep it up..

[-TraMaTiK-]

livin proof theres a god if ya need a reason
take a look at my life im still breathin

u kinda juz flipped what pac said there^

in the song 'Letter 2 My Unborn Child' pac went 'i got shot 5 times but im still breathin,livin proof theres a god if ya needa reason..'

other then that flippin..the piece was soild...idk if u didnt know or u did it intentionally or whatever but besides that it wasnt bad..stay droppin -1-