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Been Gone Along Tyme But Dun't Call It A Comeback *frees sty

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My Flows come to as white-as-crack/
leave ya'll bitches tighter then the rope around yo *nut-sack*//
They say im doper then whack like *swizz-beats* on b.e.t/
leave the gun straped incase i gotta pull it and *lick-shots-n-kill-ya peeps*//
I got that hand cannon clip ready to blast/
The nine mil on my hip ready to test-if-you-pass//
Keep the murder simple 1 shot to the dome i ain't need no *mask*/
Nor the chrome jus take the knife and you should have no qustions to be *askin*//
yo brains lookin like the ice cream *baskin* robins /
Yea i shoot shots like *mary-be-poppin*// (mary poppins)
i been threw it all ive been *carryed-out-tha-coffin*/
but yall softer-then poptarts ive spoken my word now go get *burried-in-the-cop's-inn*//


not really done but feed whould be good thx
pEacE ~1~
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I think its funny 8th is never around, never postin but hes always on point wit this link rule....lol
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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im drunk n that wasnt good feed edited
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~Symbolikull~ wrote:I think its funny 8th is never around, never postin but hes always on point wit this link rule....lol
lol word^^^...but it was ight man..nothin like o0o0 woahh krazy..but ya no takes practice..wasnt really feelin the whole piece maybe like few lines here n there..i think u cud do betta keep @ it man -1-
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yea fa sho fa sho its NUN SPECIAL lol but i told in a pervios post im start dropin hot shit so yea ..look out eva OvaDose Is comin back......
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~Symbolikull~ wrote:I think its funny 8th is never around, never postin but hes always on point wit this link rule....lol
haha yeah. ive been around just not postin much, been too busy.



but ovadose, you need to edit your first post with a link or this will be closed.
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Post by complexity »

This wasn't good at all. Plus you're a fraud. We will all help you elevate your writtens. If you finally admit the creation chamber shit wasn't yours. And start trying to actually become a better artist.

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Break the Addiction OvaDose, Break the Addiction
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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why u clamin am a fraud?? i didn't kno yall like lookin at myspace;s nor did i kno yall had one,.. ???? so explain how am i fake?? besides my videos and audio cuz u kno what plex ill pay ya ticket to fly down here to t.dot and u tell me how im fake iigh pEacE
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lmao...Its obvious man. Do you think we are all fucking mindless?
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